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Fragments and Participles
by Louisa A Dobbins → (All Poetry by Louisa A Dobbins)
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I've gotta keep movin', I've gotta keep movin', cause I'm a long way from where I've been..

 


I wonder sometimes do I make sense, and I ask what makes me think I can write.


I Remember when I was healing from the mistaken dosage of medication I was adminestered in the hospital. 


God did not plan for me to come to Him:  Not yet. Still He won't allow me to see myself.  I am tone deaf to my voice, but I am still invited to perform or should I say minester to congregations of people.


Some poetry has been edited, some has not.  I am sure most of the good folk on AD have trouble with my fragments and as my High School English teacher would say, "Do something with that dangling participle."


This sounds like farewell, No it is not, but I will regroup my work. Some day soon with the help of the writers alliance my book, "A Ram In the Bush", should be on shelves.


Forgive me, please don't consider me rude, but some of this work on my site needs to be cleared up--NOW!


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 Reviews of "Fragments and Participles"
Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on January 7, 2007
Thank you for sharing this one Louisa.

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2007
May the good Lord bless you! What an honest person you are! I have no trouble reading and understanding your work...wise words you always offer.God Bless you, Holly

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on January 6, 2007
If you intend to publish any book, there must be editing involved. Ask Holly. Everyone commits mistakes. I have to be extra careful about my own writings and often review what I write. However rest assured that there are many here who commit mistakes. We don't point them out because it does not matter really. Victor

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling
Reviewed on January 5, 2007
I love it! Louisa you are like a breath of fresh air here at the den, I don't have a bit of trouble understanding or reading your work, it is filled with words of wisdom, spirit, love, compassion, joy, peace, and all from the heart of a beautiful soul! Can't wait to read A Ram in the Bush....
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling


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