Captivated yet teetering held by gossamer threads of promise sporadically reeled back into safety precarious balance claiming self as uncertainty threatens to sever the need to return escalating while symmetry remains illusive as the master puppeteer manipulates the bond that tethers his pupil.
Illumination breaks through the coquetted toy hesitates breaks the thread that binds and flies free and windswept far above the ceiling of illusion now granted metamorphosis sensibility is reclaimed reaching toward tomorrow's wonder melded into the comfort of truth lovingly reclaimed by reality's light she triumphantly journeys onward.
What a beautiful and enlightening write Marcia its captivating from beginning to end...SPECATULAR is the word that comes to mind...Love and hugs, Bonnie
In the Whirlwind is a poetic storm that frees history from the cages of corruption and puts it in the hands of everyday people. Words are weaved into a new fashion statement that has nothing to do with runways but everything to do with projects!
Contraband Marriage, traveling along the hemline of loving after incarceration, is a love story written in lyric and free form, set in reality with a different ever after.
Starman
Much gratitude,
Aberjhani
Edwin
Lovely work Marcia
hugs, Myrna
Ted
Captivating.
Georg
Sandie Angel :o)
Superior use of language and sustained metaphor make this poem so worthwhile and illuminating. A fine piece.
John
Be always safe,
Karen