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The Silent Monster
by Joyce E Bowling → (All Poetry by Joyce E Bowling)
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I think most can relate to this subject...credit card debt can be a scary thing if one allows it to get out of control or control them.




The Silent Monster

Lying in wait for its victim to snare…
Enticing and preying on the weak…
This silent monster…unable to speak,
For if it could, I am sure it would say…
Use me…have fun…live it up today,
It is simple…you will see,
enjoy yourself…use me I am free.
Slide me through and sign your name…
In return many treasures you will gain.
Taunting, laughing it will tease…
Soon you’ll be mine…
As a sore festers so this illness webs…
turning quickly to disease…
So the monster grows.
Widening its pit to make room for the next…
Luring unsuspecting victims in,
Trapped in the dark and lonely mire.
Buy today and pay tomorrow…
Consuming its victims in the pit of debt and fire.
Weakening and devouring day by day…
Sign your name…laughs the monster…
Give me your life…
As you slowly sign your freedom away.


Written By: Joyce Bowling
©Copyright 2006
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 Reviews of "The Silent Monster"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on July 11, 2007
Wise words, Joyce. Of course, you know how I feel about this topic already. Thank you. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on June 29, 2007
Ah yes. . . the plastic money monster. An all consuming hunger. But there is a hero that can snap his knees off. . . he is called, SUPER SCISSORS! You gave me a smile with this one.

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on November 13, 2006
Exceptional poem, Joyce, the message loud and clear. It's so easy to use the card because we fool ourselves ... no money is exchanging hands. Again, exceptional!
Love,
CJ

Reviewed by Maria Charlotte (Reader)
Reviewed on November 7, 2006
So very true!!!
A good warning in form of a great poem.

Thanks,
MC

Reviewed by Rhonda Galizia
Reviewed on November 1, 2006
Joyce,

Great write with a warning! We don't use credit cards..if we can't buy it with cash, we can't "afford" it..so we don't buy it. We have a debit card that can be used AS a credit card when necessary, but like Victor's Casklink in Malta, it comes from you own bank account!

Blessings, Rhonda

Reviewed by Constance Gotsch
Reviewed on October 31, 2006
Nice metaphor for Halloween. Being in debt and over spending can be ghoulish

Reviewed on October 31, 2006


"The Silent Monster"

An excellent write Joyce!

Have a wonderful upcoming holiday.

Take care and thank you for sharing,
From the Heart of an Artist Quiet Storm

Reviewed by J M (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2006
Credit cards are wicked they destroy families, people can't sleep and live on the edge they do not know how to control the freedom of plastic money and find them selves victims that can damage or destroy. This is very good Joyce.....

Bless you,
Josleyn

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 31, 2006
Ditto Rusty!!

love Tinka

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 31, 2006
Good timing just before the xmas splash..

Reviewed on October 31, 2006
Joyce,

Boy, howdy, I know this alllllllll too well. Credit card debt, credit problems can ruin you for l i f e !!!! An excellent, timely warning, very well written.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Louisa Dobbins
Reviewed on October 31, 2006
you are a bit late with this one Joyce. I'm going to send mine to Dove and open an account in Malta.

Reviewed by Rusty Daily
Reviewed on October 31, 2006
Wise lesson expressed very well
Rusty

Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on October 30, 2006
In Malta banks use credit cards just lik any other country. However here we have a safety valve. We have a special card which can be used internationally. It can only be used if you have money in your bank. If your account is empty it will reject the transaction. We call it Casklink. It is safe and it will not let you overspend. Victor

Reviewed by Dove JoAnne Cromp (Reader)
Reviewed on October 30, 2006
Yep, I know it all too well..I have a trick..I never go over $600.00 and if I do I cut the card up with scissors..


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