I have removed this poem due to copyright purposes as it will soon be published in my new and upcoming book. As always I appreciate you taking the time to stop by my den. Sorry for the inconvenience...
"Dear Diary"
Joyce a treasure trove of imageries depicted here in this subtle and beautiful serenity divulged through this work.
Thank you for sharing just beautiful,
Sincerely,
From the Heart...
OH My at a yard sale, I once found a diary of
an old vessel and their ride and romance before they married!
This write brought it all back!
Loved reading this Joyce1
Thank you for sharing!
YOu really know how to write stories with flair, flow and ease!
WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
P.s. That little voice is our constant reminder! This was all brought
together in a wonderful mystery! I truly love this!
A gem to treasure!
Love this Joyce... You sound so like me... you can turn all these thoughts round in your brain in the twinkling of an eye, like a kid's flip book where all the "still" pictures run along with movement as you flick the pages. And, dear me... where do all those years go??? Scary, yet warm and lingering with the permanence and enduring qualities of it all. Very well sketched for us, too. TY Kate xx
Joyce, what a beautiful reminder to all of us...that within old houses, barns, cedar chests, etc., are treasures that can speak if we take the time to search for them. I loved the mystic of this piece and also the voice I heard when I read it. Thanks for such a wonderful read.
I love the way you portray the mystery and romance of a love that was born so long ago. Marvelous insight into a force that cannot be erased. Well done, Joyce!
~Butch
Such an enjoyable read! I felt I was peering into someone's life of long ago, walking through her home, seeing it with her eyes! How beautiful. Really enjoyed the trip down memory lane.....
Wow I love this journey of the estate sale
And what a wonderful trip it was
You must have been extremely happy
Such A secret Wow
Excellent imagery as I too could smell
The scent of the old paper
Love and Peace to you always
Your friend...Morning Star
This one had me anxious to read the next line! I love estate sales. Sales of any kind, really! I was really caught up in this poem until the last verse kinda stumpted me! Went from 1897 to 2007~ over a hundred year time period. Caught myself thinking! Beautiful writing, as usual Joyce. You never seize to amaze me!
Joyce, "Dear Diary" may be "just a fun write", but it is beautiful and so well written that it is entirely believable. One can just imagine that woman from decades ago. One can also imagine you going into an ancient old mansion browsing through the books with zeal and a hunger. I love your poems---especially the ones like this that tell a story.
Joyce~you have described my favorite pastime...going to estate sales, discovering old books, past lives and being instilled with awe!
Love this!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Book I of Southern Swallow Series – 12th Century scholar Li K'ai-men takes command of his first official assignments during a time of political unrest and barbarian invasions.
Regis
Rene'
God Bless
Michelle~
"Dear Diary"
Joyce a treasure trove of imageries depicted here in this subtle and beautiful serenity divulged through this work.
Thank you for sharing just beautiful,
Sincerely,
From the Heart...
an old vessel and their ride and romance before they married!
This write brought it all back!
Loved reading this Joyce1
Thank you for sharing!
YOu really know how to write stories with flair, flow and ease!
WArmly, WArrior Lady Sheeeoox
P.s. That little voice is our constant reminder! This was all brought
together in a wonderful mystery! I truly love this!
A gem to treasure!
Excellent read...
Thanks for sharing!
D
~hugs~
Karen
Love Tinka
Enjoyed
Love * Peace
William
~Butch
Be safe,
Karen
And what a wonderful trip it was
You must have been extremely happy
Such A secret Wow
Excellent imagery as I too could smell
The scent of the old paper
Love and Peace to you always
Your friend...Morning Star
Love,
Eileen
Blessings & Peace,
Linda Wells
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Love this!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
It's truly marvelous whenever we can catch glimpses into past lives.
Speachless by this pearl.
Georg
Exquisite writing my friend. I love the structure and wording of this. Bless You Always, Paul.