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Two loving hearts.....
by Karen Palumbo → (All Poetry by Karen Palumbo)
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          Two loving hearts.....

 

Sitting comfortably on a blanket,
carefully spread out on moist sand.
A woman sat, arms folded around her knees,
just staring, as if surveying the land.

Gentle breeze flowing all around,
seagulls in flight and through her hair.
Slowly reaching out to hold a hand,
of one so special with such elegant flair.

Now two loving hearts transform into one,
as day turns to night and stars sparkle above.
They talked slow and softly so no one could hear,
of days long ago when young and in love.

He dreamed of traveling, seeing the world,
religions, cultures, to enrich his young life.
She was content to stroll the cool shore,
while her heart longed just to be his wife.

All the lessons learned from people he met,
and exotic cultures from far away lands.
Trinkets, beads, gold rings and pearls,
packed in a box, not to wear on his hands.

She talked quietly of all the letters saved,
each one a precious gem from history made.
Ink partially faded, tear stained, brittle,
carefully folded, in the small box laid.

Just for a little while the two stopped talking,
admiring the stars, staring at the moon.
Still holding hands, as if afraid to let go,
praying for this moment not to end too soon.

All good things they know cycle and end,
daylight would soon begin to surface and shine.
He spoke of his love, she spoke of her devotion,
after all these years they were both out of time.

As morning approached she began to stretch,
unfold her arms, tenderly kissed her wedding band.
She picked up her blanket, slowly walking away,
only one set of foot prints imprinted in the sand.

 

 

 

Written by:
Karen Palumbo
Photography by:
Robert Palumbo
4/14/2009 © All rights reserved

 

 


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 Reviews of "Two loving hearts....."
Reviewed by Winsala O'Seun
Reviewed on July 15, 2009
Big boys dont cry but wow, I have to fight back tears. Too good to be true. You exceptional. Nice work.

Reviewed by Mary Watson
Reviewed on May 31, 2009
Karen,
My! what a way with words. Your a great writer.
You inspire me.
God Speed,
~mary

Reviewed by Sheila Roy
Reviewed on April 23, 2009
Makes me want to cry, Karen. A bitter-sweet moment with intense imagery. Excellent writing~
Sheila

Reviewed on April 22, 2009
A quiet communion of a love that can never die. Wonderfully done

Reviewed by Jerry Engler
Reviewed on April 22, 2009
That's beautiful, Karen. The writing is exquisite, and the gathering of feeling to create the scene is tremendous...........Jerry

Reviewed by Mary Coe
Reviewed on April 20, 2009
Awqesome! A beautiful write.

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on April 20, 2009
Those visions of dreams shared come back as clarity, and then you awaken refreshed by the possibilities. Enjoyed

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on April 19, 2009
I truly admire your wonderful poem. It touched my heart far more than you can imagine. It was if describing my grandparents. They shared a love like this so beautiful and real!
Peace, love, and light,
Amber "V"

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on April 18, 2009
Wow Karen this is truly an " Enchanting piece"
I was fascinated by so much beauty and sadness
and romance and true love!!
Brilliant write Karen I love the tone the flow
I Just plain Love it!!
Sending you and Robert Peace Love and Light.....Yolie

Reviewed by Michael Jones
Reviewed on April 17, 2009
Thank you Karen for reminging me how wonderful love can be. I am falling in love again with life. God bless you and Robert with one voice, one heart, in love! We could all learn something from the both of you! Peace!!!

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on April 17, 2009
What a captivating poem !. Love knows no limits or boundries and can transcend death! One of your best Karen.........M

Reviewed by kg cummings
Reviewed on April 17, 2009
Very beautifully written. I felt the loss, but also the love. Your friend, Kathy

Reviewed by J'nia Fowler
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
I was enthralled and then warmed by the beauty of a lasting love. Beautiful, thank you, J'nia

Reviewed on April 16, 2009
Enjoyed the beauty and yet sadness.

All the best,
Gwendolyn


Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
I actually let out a long-resounding "aaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhh!" at the end of this, Karen. I was drawn into your poem line by line and the resolution made my eyes truly water. Such tenderness, togetherness and devotion endures the separation of death itself, I'm sure. Beautiful in every way. TY Kate xx

Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.
Reviewed on April 16, 2009
Wow Karen.......I had to read this one several times to get the full impact......a melancholy poem filled with romance and tenderness......beautiful work my friend. Hope all is well with you and yours.

Much love always,

Bill :-)

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on April 15, 2009
memories of true love never fade away Karen -- they are as vivid in all our today's and tomorrows as they were in our yesterdays -- very beautifully written my dear friend -- peace and love -- Jon michael

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 15, 2009
This is a truly lovely write Karen, it reminded me of part of the eulogy I delivered at my sister in laws funeral, here husband was a military pilot who was killed in a helicopter crash almost twenty years ago...his body was never recovered but she always said someday she would be reunited with him and so I mentioned that in the eulogy that we should celebrate that reunion instead of her death.

Fee

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on April 15, 2009
All Good Things Cycle And End,i.e. Even Which Thus Thou Have It Shall be Taken Away From You...

Not My Word But Of (God)s Word...

Keep Em Comen Karen...

Your Friend,TRASK

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on April 15, 2009
A surprise twist at the end...that left me smiling, and yet a tad melancholy for the woman who must miss her husband terribly. This poem made me think of my father, who I am sure must occasionally visit with my departed mother too.

Cryssa

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on April 15, 2009
Breath taking sweet lady and such a beautiful picture as well dear Robert....very well done indeed..stay safe and well...Hugsss

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on April 15, 2009
Karen, you know how many are keeping those memories, talking softly to each other words that nobody can hear?
Your poem talks of a love that could not, would not disappear behing the words "life must go on" What they know?
An exquisite poem from a exquisite han.

Georg


Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 15, 2009
A powerfully sad ending to a very lovely piece.

Reviewed on April 15, 2009
Many would envy your beautiful memories.

s

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 15, 2009
Beautiful write Karen. Very well done my friend.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on April 14, 2009
Karen, this is so poignant, so beautiful, so very lovely. This is my new favorite of yours...it goes into my library.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on April 14, 2009
Karen, so long as you continue to write with such skill,
such warmth and tenderness, there'll always be the link
of two loving hearts. Beautifully said. -gene.

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on April 14, 2009
deep sighs, very beautiful

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley
Reviewed on April 14, 2009
Very tender. . .
Ended sadly.
"All good things they know cycle and end"
Doug

Reviewed by L. Figgins
Reviewed on April 14, 2009
The loss of one so loved is devastating. But to have that kind of love is a miracle--some never experience it. Beautiful write, Karen...

Reviewed on April 14, 2009
Simply gorgeous, Karen; very nice! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love to you and the gang~

As always, your friend in Burleson, Karen Lynn. :D X0X0X0X0X0

Reviewed on April 14, 2009
Beautiful Karen. Well written.

Cynthia

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on April 14, 2009
Karen,
Unity and separation, different hopes and dreams and yet together in the bonds of friendship and love. So well said!
John

Reviewed on April 14, 2009
Once upon a time, you are travelling aways, where you in Sweden lately? very tender poem Karen. Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on April 14, 2009
This one got to me. When one losses a loved one, a part of you is lost also. I'm so sorry for your loss and hope it's just a sad poem and not reality but many can relate to it.

Reviewed on April 14, 2009
Oh, Karen and Robert -

This is powerfully penned and illustrated. Two loving hearts united through love, even though one is missing - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(


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