Can you just pretend
That you still love me?
Even if it's for just awhile.
Cause that is all that I need,
To turn my frown into a smile.
~*~
Can you just make believe
that you still do care,
About the feelings that
I still have for you?
~*~
I know that for you
It's no longer there.
But can you just pretend
Only for an hour or two?
~*~
Can you just make believe
that you are sorry,
For deeply hurting me
So deep down inside?
~*~
You are still such a big
part of me,
Even though you have left
Oh so long ago.
~*~
Never have I been able
to ever set you free.
So can you just pretend?
Just as you have always
Done so many times before.
~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~*~
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Reviewed by Sanil nath (Reader)
Reviewed on December 27, 2002
Hey Trixie ,
Excellent Write and it goes with the Real Love ... Sometimes, the world is so difficult to understand. I can feel how you feel. I can understand what is going on in such a heart. Wish such a love never exesis. Bcoz is will hurt the real lover so much. Not becoz he/she is not able to find a new love. But bcoz the memories are so deep in heart and the love he/she carried with him/her was so strong and with lot respect and with lot care and with lot lot many things ... Wish the person understand the loser ... The world we move around is so bad in love. Bcoz what i personally feel now is their is no true LOVE in this world. Its Better to be like a Season in this world ... Sothat we can also chage it according to what month it is.
You are my dream girl Trixie. Wonderful, feeling so deeply, poet. Love pours from you heart and you write terrific caring poetry. How good you are hon and how hard working to produce this type poetry with the music. All your poems are works of Art
and I love you for this. Happy Holidays. Bill Murray
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Excellent Write and it goes with the Real Love ... Sometimes, the world is so difficult to understand. I can feel how you feel. I can understand what is going on in such a heart. Wish such a love never exesis. Bcoz is will hurt the real lover so much. Not becoz he/she is not able to find a new love. But bcoz the memories are so deep in heart and the love he/she carried with him/her was so strong and with lot respect and with lot care and with lot lot many things ... Wish the person understand the loser ... The world we move around is so bad in love. Bcoz what i personally feel now is their is no true LOVE in this world. Its Better to be like a Season in this world ... Sothat we can also chage it according to what month it is.
~Sanil
your poem was very moving and as always perfectly written.
God bless you always and especially at this time of year.
With love from
Kay.
~kari~
This is so beautiful and heartfelt.
{{ AS YOU SIS DO}}
Merry Christmas and a Happy New Years
{{Sagi Sis Peg}}
Lots hugs and love SIS'
Me
Jack
Have a wonderful, safe Holiday!
and I love you for this. Happy Holidays. Bill Murray
Merry Xmas!
Blue eyed fish...
good write
shalom
john+