Suburbanization has destroyed my old, familiar places as surely as any other great disaster.
Copyright 2008, Jerry W. Engler
Shunga Nunga,
living pathway of all,
beautiful stream of childhood gone
looping your way between
the green grassy hills of home
down to the very bedrock
of everything that has been before.
Bullheads and bluegill
lived in the shade of
your geat masthead trees
while blue-green dragonflies
added more sheen
above the ripples
on your many bends and curves.
You no longer slowly
make your way below
the high wooden bridge
on the bend by Marilyn's,
or wander by the goat farm
below the ancient hill
named for Chief Burnet
because your way
has been laid straight.
You were stretched to lie
like a giant gut ripped
from the bowels of the earth,
your life left to dry
in the sun
and at night
before the orange-red
glowing embers of
your years of timber growth.
Bulldozers piled the
ruptured piles of black soil
and yellow-white clays until
they could be laid over by the miles
of asphalt and concrete,
houses and stores
to leave you a canal
with the trees slowly growing
as the harbingers of life
try to replace
the hundred thousand years
of vitality green growth
along the promise of
the drainage sewer.
What childhood is it now
to remember the sterility of
your hard-surfaced drainage
and your floating flock
of fast food cups
and plastic bags?
Shunga Nunga,
the tennis courts
are nice,
and the people can get
more than a hundred
channels to look at
instead of looking
at you.
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Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on April 5, 2008
As a life-long environmental educator/conservationist, this one really got me - it reminds me of an old song by New Riders of the Purple Sage called "Last Lonely Eagle", yet I imagine John Prine singing your words.
Jerry. This is great personification, or an Ode? I like the details. In the 4th stanza, the 8th line, it might be better not to end a line with a preposition, "of." Why not "glowing embers" then the next line could be, "of your years" and the last line "in timber growth."
we better take our time and let the things that mean the most and hange on to the people and nature that gives us beauty and lasting momories...and not give it a second thought.
They laid waste to natures birthright for a temporal spoonful of puns. A hundred channels and nothing but static.
Reviewed by Julie Murphy (Reader)
Reviewed on January 30, 2008
Poignant and powerful, this poem truly hits home. It's about a sad state of affairs, under the misnomer of 'progress'. A wonderful poem, Jerry. Thank you.
You've truly, and very sadly, hit home with this one, my friend. One of the saddest and most heartbreaking things to me over the last 50 years, is seeing so very many of my wondrous and truly beautiful old childhood haunts vanish.
We now rip up and tear out our once wondrously beautiful rural countryside at an astounding rate of 36.5 acres an hour, every single hour of every single day, according to gov. statistics, and each acre gone rips at my heart a little more.
And unless we all start complaining, our insatiable, never-ending, modern day urban sprawl will never end until there isn't a single natural acre left.
My next book, Where The Redwing Sings, addresses this truly sad state of affairs.
This reminds me of Joni Mitchells yellow taxi,( You got a parking lot
you wrote a wonderful adress to every ones heart that is pining for those good old days, when man still had a closer relationship to each other, and nature. I felt what you felt in that poem, I like many others have similar memories. Bless You! Jasmin Horst
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on January 29, 2008
the people can get
more than a hundred
channels to look at
instead of looking
at you. <--------------Sums it all up...My little ole country school is now a bussiness centre and housing estate. It is heart breaking, one thinks time will stand still, and these beautiful places remain.
We won't be happy till the world is a concrete jungle...
Oh, yes, we must cherish what we still have of nature in its pristine state before all is gone.
Today, less than a mile from my home, I passed a car-slaughtered coyete on the edge of a new freeway, its death a reminder that the advance of our civilization sadly pays the price of shrunken hillsides and gentle streams and leaves many of God's creatures homeless and without resource. I regret much of what we gain.
Thank you for posting
Gina
We now rip up and tear out our once wondrously beautiful rural countryside at an astounding rate of 36.5 acres an hour, every single hour of every single day, according to gov. statistics, and each acre gone rips at my heart a little more.
And unless we all start complaining, our insatiable, never-ending, modern day urban sprawl will never end until there isn't a single natural acre left.
My next book, Where The Redwing Sings, addresses this truly sad state of affairs.
you wrote a wonderful adress to every ones heart that is pining for those good old days, when man still had a closer relationship to each other, and nature. I felt what you felt in that poem, I like many others have similar memories. Bless You! Jasmin Horst
more than a hundred
channels to look at
instead of looking
at you. <--------------Sums it all up...My little ole country school is now a bussiness centre and housing estate. It is heart breaking, one thinks time will stand still, and these beautiful places remain.
We won't be happy till the world is a concrete jungle...
Today, less than a mile from my home, I passed a car-slaughtered coyete on the edge of a new freeway, its death a reminder that the advance of our civilization sadly pays the price of shrunken hillsides and gentle streams and leaves many of God's creatures homeless and without resource. I regret much of what we gain.
Richard
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla. :(