If I could (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 5, 2006

To me, this is "true" love, Eileen. I particularly love the selflessness of the last stanza. Thank you for sharing this gift. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on July 4, 2006

compelling and well written!

Reviewed by Paul Williams

Reviewed on July 4, 2006

A damn fine write Eileen.

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Gwen Dickerson

Reviewed on July 4, 2006

A wonderfully profound declaration of true love, Eileen! Excellent! Bravo!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 4, 2006

This is unconditional love!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Connie Hinnen Cook (Reader)

Reviewed on July 4, 2006

Just keep on writing about this kind of Love
and maybe some selfish, unthinking soul
will finally see the light.
This is splendid, Eileen!

Reviewed by Birgit and Roger Pratcher

Reviewed on July 4, 2006

Would it not be wonderful if one could? Beautiful done, Eileen!
Love, B&R

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on July 4, 2006

If I could
I would love you until you love you

Quite profound, Tiger Lily.

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on July 3, 2006

I would love you until you love you

there is a love that's true and real and honest enough to admit "if I could" - this really touched me. Dawn

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on July 3, 2006

This was beautiful
And Im still searching for mine in my dreams

Love & Peace
William

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 3, 2006

Someone could be really lucky...Ed (I am jealous, Rufuz)

Reviewed by J. Allen Wilson

Reviewed on July 3, 2006

to the true definition of love does this ring true. For to give of ones all for the sake of love and to heal through its broken need, is to shine brightest amongst the stars of heaven�this you do by giving so free.

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter

Reviewed on July 3, 2006

I admire your dedication and heart. We are true sisters of the spirit Eileen.
Love,
Susan

Reviewed by m j hollingshead

Reviewed on July 3, 2006

well done

Reviewed by ROCK-Salt! Proctor

Reviewed on July 3, 2006

When can you get here? Or better, yet I'll come to you. For, all of us, can use, that loving portion, you just, offered, it rings, powerful and true.

Reviewed by L. Figgins

Reviewed on July 3, 2006

Agape love! You penned it, Eileen. Fine...

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on July 3, 2006

This is such a moving declaration of unconditional love, spirtual and I think earthly .......it could be applied to a romantic interest, or a child.........
written by a lovely heart

good good good ET

pax Anita

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on July 3, 2006

You should have titled this "Every Mother's Prayer" Eileen. What tender words you have penned for us all to share. This should be on the wall of every maternity ward and every classroom so that children will know that they are never alone and so that parents will understand their mission. Excellent offering!
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on July 3, 2006

What are you waiting for..This boy needs all the above..

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 3, 2006

Eileen

I agree with Jerry below completly...
Some people's version of love is in fact a stifling and possessive form of control...
You show us the true meaning of Unconditional Love...

Peter

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on July 3, 2006

2 "if I could's" and 6 "I would's"

Seems you are much more willing to give than you are to be given too. It is better to give than receive I believe. The way I see it, if all were giving, than all would be receiving.

Eileen, you are infectiously creative and I always glean something from your constructs dear one.

Richard
P.S. I agree with Jerry too!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on July 3, 2006

And that, my friend Eileen, is what is known as love without strings. There is not a whole lot of that going round these days.