like lights reflecting me wrapped in rays of you moonbeams silver glow refraction uniting me to you embraced am I in taste of you entwined are we in scintilation kissed are we in coruscation enflamed are we in excitation we gleam in gleeful adoration igniting full illumination thrilled are we in consummation til golden mornings sunlight seeps neath blinds like prismatic rainbows
A mesmerizing offering, Eileen. That of which you write here is one of the reasons my presence at AD has been rather limited of late. Thank you for sharing this uplifting gift. Love and peace to you,
Brushed by the pen of greatness; this is a fantastic poem, Eileen! BRAVA; very well done~
Thanks for your prayers! Much appreciated! :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
Reviewed by A. Santo (Reader)
Reviewed on July 5, 2006
You have painted the picture of the divine two as one and your photo of choice is a great compliment to the writing. When two souls agree to join in their journey, the display of light they project is multi-faceted I believe. Each person bringing their own individual color(s) to the relationship and projecting in harmony just like the rainbow.
Love Tionka
B&R
Regis
~~martin~`
desire!
You explode in verse!
Susan
Thanks for the LIFT!
love&prayers, Rhonda
pax........a
makes me think of Dorothy :)
Reindeer
seems to fit the mood i'm in.... i'm in lust or love or whatever.
TX
Thanks for your prayers! Much appreciated! :)
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
This is explosive and incendiary, like a July The Fourth Firework Display....
Did I hear the earth move too...:)
Scintillating write
Peter