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So Lonely Tonight
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The tears won't fall
they stay in my eyes
swimming like fish
blurring my sight
i'm so lonely tonight


Listen to the music
write a few lines
sip some good wine
I just don't feel right
i'm so lonely tonight


Why isn't he here
everythings bare
that special feeling
somehow took flight
i'm so lonely tonight


Such very close friends
wasn't supposed to end
like two peas in a pod
we had the same sight
i'm so lonely tonight


For such silly reasons
we can't even recall
we let good sense stall
we didn't even fight
i'm so lonely tonight


I can't get to sleep
I just want to weep
the hurt is so deep
this just isn't right
i'm so lonely tonight


etw


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 Reviews of "So Lonely Tonight"
Reviewed by Debra Baker
Reviewed on March 19, 2007
A beautiful poem. A picture of a soulmate that could have been more. You write from within the soul capturing the imagination.

Reviewed by m j hollingshead
Reviewed on March 17, 2007
good one

Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Brought to mind the line from a McCartney song, 'And another lonely night, can't wait forever'
Too long to be restless inside.

Regards
Daibhidh

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Not to worry sis I am with you on this one!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Randall Barfield
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
this poem too is a lament. i feel for the narrator and her plight

Reviewed by Debby Rosenberg
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
awe...you've captured this sensation with specific detail

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
that feeling like the loneliness is etching a painful groove in your soul is captured well here, Eileen, and I hate that you or anybody, ever, has to experience it. first three lines are excellent setup for what follows. healing and joy, Dawn

Reviewed by Michael Mathieu (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
So sad but true, been there done that...
Best to you...

Michael

Reviewed on March 16, 2007
beautiful and heartfelt Eileen.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Rufuz is here all alone when I work and just loves to be cuddled...come on out east & cuddle with him...lonely feelings will just seem to fall away, I know...Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Yay, wots the point of being by yourself, come to the cabaret, Tiggs, life is a cabaret ole Tiggs....

Reviewed by Jibril Mohamed
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
You described the pain of loneliness in this beautiful poem. The most sorrowful pain is when tears cannot come out of the eyes. You lack a way to explain why that should happen to you. It is sad when things fall apart like this.

Abdullahi

Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Eileen~

As long as you have God on your side, you are never alone! I hope for better health for you; you are in my prayers, girl! Very sad write; very well done as always! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
An extremely sad and heartfelt piece, Tiger Lily.

Reviewed by Susan Sonnen
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
I like the simplicity of this. A simple statement of lonliness. It leaves me feeling a bit melancholy myself...

Reviewed by CJ Heck
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
This is a poignant and honest write, Eileen. There are times when loneliness just seems to overpower us with no rhyme or reason. Thank God, it isn't all the time -- I know we can feel lonely in a crowd of people. Just one of the human conditions, I guess. Better times are ahead, sweet poet lady.
Love and hugs to you,
CJ

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Love sure can tie you in knots when it goes awry.

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on March 16, 2007
Eileen,

Sad and soul aching write my friend.

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on March 15, 2007
Oh my! Friendship and love always sad until together again.
Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed on March 15, 2007
Eileen,

A c h i n g l y poignant...I hope He comes soon! :) You have us (Karen and me) on your side, as well, so you're never alone. :) Get to feeling better soon, 'kay?

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on March 15, 2007
So wish I could help you, but we are
too far a part.
Nice lonely poem, now me feeling lonely..
x0x0x0x


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