Summer skies are getting nearer Comes now the season love adores Creator hides spring til next year Prepare to laze on sandy shores Ocean's melodic song stirs senses To arouse in you thrills of desire Together aligned with no pretenses It's not the sun setting you on fire Sultry memory in romantic crave Fingers ecstatic glide over skin Divine echoes dance in on waves Erotic thoughts show lascivious grin No guilt, no worry just plain out glee Has cormorants skipping over the sea In briny waters where all can play We take part in sharing a glorious day
Yes Eileen, Summer's on it's way. Really enjoyed this one, but having been around Gulls trying to feed them I shiver at the thought of liquid bombs LOL.
It's all those dancing shadows and silhouettes, sparkling in both sea and sand, Eileen... Tricks the eye and mind wonderfully when the spirit is quickened and enlivened with the salt-stir winds racing through blood and bones... Yep, surf is permanently up on the Burnside beaches these days! Very Isley Brothers and Bill Withers, thank you. Kate xx
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 1, 2007
I'd be perfect target practice for those gulls.
Summer gives a divine hi...
We will be sharing that glorious day with our allergies but no lascivious grin on our faces, just the charming expression of headache coming with the pollen.
A nice poem....atchoo!!!
Georg
I miss the ocean so much, used to spend my evenings sitting on the beach, so relaxing. Now am homesick for the cry of the seagulls, the water kissing the sand, the smell of the salty air.....So wonderful!
Yes, I believe it is! We had our warmest weekend so far this season, but Spring storms in the forecast for the upcoming week...ick. I'd rather have the heat (although hot days wear me down). Never satisfied! LOL However, I am totally satisfied by this beautiful, hopeful poem. Well done!
This are a superb piece of prose,
My friend! Full of deep passion
And desire, and yet such
Tenderness within the lines.
Your wording so delicate and vivid imagery
I love it!!
Love And Peace To you always
Your friend...Morning Star
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2007
What a beauty of a picture..
Always love your stuff..
SMoooooooooooooo0000000000CH!
The beach weather has yet to arrive up this end of the country, but we are experiencing some sun and warmer weather I would love to live there on that beach except for all the erosion I see...E
Sepsis knocked her down and out. Faith, hope, and gave her the strength to get back on her feet. I am a Runner She fought the river of death They said she'd never run again
She proved them wrong...
This book is an autobiographical account of the lessons I learned about life and how I was able to apply them to inspire, motivate and empower others in my own work as a firefighter, as well in my daily life as a husband, a father and a man. When I w
She never felt safe at home as a young girl, and didn't understand why when she finally escaped she wasn't safe in the big wide world either ...effectively jumping out of the frying pan into the fire!
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Summer gives a divine hi...
nice festive/erotic atmosphere in this poem ...
Blessings,
Joyce Bowling
Love, B&R
Ron
Love Tinka
Reindeer
A nice poem....atchoo!!!
Georg
Be safe,
Karen
Makes me jealous going into winter here.
Excellent work
Yes, I believe it is! We had our warmest weekend so far this season, but Spring storms in the forecast for the upcoming week...ick. I'd rather have the heat (although hot days wear me down). Never satisfied! LOL However, I am totally satisfied by this beautiful, hopeful poem. Well done!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
My friend! Full of deep passion
And desire, and yet such
Tenderness within the lines.
Your wording so delicate and vivid imagery
I love it!!
Love And Peace To you always
Your friend...Morning Star
Always love your stuff..
SMoooooooooooooo0000000000CH!
I really liked this Eileen.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
Yep! spring is in the air and summer's on the way.