My Waterloo (poem) by E T Waldron on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on June 12, 2007

Such a sad powerful write ..!....M

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

excellent, Eileen~

Reviewed by Abdi-Noor Mohamed (Eagle Of Hope)

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

Sad indeed. Unfortunately that is where selfish people end up no matter where they are or who they are their destiny is the same.

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

Oh my very sad...Hugsssssssssssss

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

An extremely sad tale, Tiger Lily.

Reviewed by George Thompson

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

ET,
Sorrowful feelings when I read this, but so well written (and all in LOWERCASE) which I love to see. This refreshed me and makes me ponder my own life's future.

Thanks,
George

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on June 5, 2007

This has shades of IRIS innit, ( Judy Dench) hmmm, in any case its a keeper.
We reap what we sow in this life for sure.
Do not take any notice of that person below telling you how to spell LOLOL. You can spell colour any way you want ROFL.

You are my favourite writer Queen. No one writes like you do.
Love n hugs
Ch'erie
PS I went up into the High Country and I havent come down... well not in my head at least :)

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

Oh my Eileen, sounds just like the mother I used to know.........

Be safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

EXcellence, Eileen, both at the top of our respective poetry meter having made it tonight, you never know how these things are going to fly! Even with graphic, is the audience going to decipher?? I did! I have arrived, knowing how I did get here...faith, spiritualism, and goddess prayer...Blessed Be.

Warmly and in Kindred Spirit,

Sage

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

E x c e l l e n t !!

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

Great write, picture and introduction just fit together perfectly. Thank you for this write. Lady J

Reviewed by H Cruz

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

Bitter is a flavor garnished from the bark on the great tree of life.

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

sad how when one detaches from all that matters to them, they have a difficult time understanding the ramifications of losing all until its too late ... nicely penned, moving poem ...

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

Would be sad to die alone..
those who can't love others usually
wind up this way.
Fine write...
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Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

Darn, I thought you were gunna inflict more pain on the naughty French.

Indeed a very poignant penn...Hey, you said film, not movie, yay yay yay, be spelling coloUr next.

What was the film? Sound bit like Wings of a Dove....

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

sadly there are those who make similar choices-a well penned poem-love the picture as well

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

We reap what we sow. I think nothing is more important than stopping to help someone. Even if you are alone at the end, you will be fullfilled. Good poets write their obsevations. Yours are keen.

Ron

Reviewed by Barbara Smith

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

E.T., this is sad but oh so true...you get back in this life what you have given. I've seen this happen in many peoples lives, but yet, when they are alone they blame it on everyone else but themselves. You've expressed this in a great poem.

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

Such a powerful and sad write my friend, but all too often there are people all across the world who live this same kind of life, must be lonely! You've captured it well with this offering!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Morning Star

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

Powerful message very sad but many
Times this has been known to happens
As the saying goes you made your bed lay on it!
Outstanding message withing this write!!
Love and Peace to you always..Morning Star

Reviewed by Jibril Mohamed

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

A good lesson. Outstanding piece. True words of wisdom.

Thank you Eileen.

Jibril

Reviewed by Richard Hiebner

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

Intense, powerful ... I agree full with Theresa Koch.
Awesome

Reviewed by Theresa Koch

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

Powerful and sad piece just exceptional~`*

Reviewed by Stan Grimes (Reader)

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

Great title for a very excellent write. One of your best.

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

We do map our own downfalls by the choices we make.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

Excellent write Eileen!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by D Johnson

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

Eileen, beautiful!, that's all I can say. The picture adds so much to your inspiration.

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by Bill Grimes Jr.

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

"living for oneself makes
of life a wicked brew"

Poignant and sharp wisdom my friend. Beautiful poetry.

Peace,

Bill

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

We certainly do reap what we sow in this life Sugar Chum, and it always comes in due season. This exceptional poem, with the undergirding image, is quite indicative of that reality. Well done!
Light and Wisdom and Love ...
Richard

Reviewed by Douglas Bentley

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

A perfect poem
With a perfect picture
The choices we make
Are sometimes hard to take.
DWB

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

Excellent capture of this type of personality.

Reviewed by john zimmerman

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

dark and haunting

good write

j+

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 4, 2007

Eileen,

Definately haunting and poignant verse, excellently expressed: well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.