The act of sex is truly love if the love you feel is real the thrills and chills the exalted thrust will come to nil if only lust tasty lips that open wide for tongues to play and find their way to meet with pleasure each ones treasure will be the sweeter to measure if love joins lust bringing coition to fruition
I like the "thrills-chills, pleasure-treasure, coition-fruition" play
You certainly cover the topics in your poems. Maybe I'll read you for advice instead of La Belle...
Awesome yes lust is very different from true love
Lust almost never satisfies and cannot
Filled the emptiness of the heart
Only true love can overcome that emptiness!
Excellent write!
Love Peace and Hugsss to you...Morning Star
I have to agree with Cedric III lust make you long for more of what you can't have and love is for the taking and can be very satisfying. Loved your poem. Thank you for sharing Eileen. Newfie Hugs,
Rose
When love joins lust, what a joyous union they make.
Reviewed by Flying Fox Ted L Glines (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2007
Well penned, Eileen (as always) - and it sure would be nice if folks figured out that lust (without love) is momentary, tiring, messy, and pointless. You get the message across very nicely with this one.
Your poems always have such a solid, concrete thought to them. But the genius of your poetry is that you find eloquent and meaningful ways of portraying that thought without diminishing its overall effect.
You are a wonder to read.
Leo
yes...
this is the difference between love and lust.
lust rarely satisfies and leaves you wanting more to fill the gap that only love can fill.
i lust you never did have that same ring...
well written =)
Reviewed by Victor Buhagiar (Reader)
Reviewed on August 12, 2007
That should be what any rational peron/s should do. Lust for lust sake takes you nowhere and can never satiate. Victor
I definately do not shun these tions - coition - fruition...great love mathematics, Eileen! Even the "exalted thrust" gives measurement to these lines that ROCK! I s'pose the graphic is too hot to touch...be well...Blessed Be.
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You certainly cover the topics in your poems. Maybe I'll read you for advice instead of La Belle...
Love Tinka
Lust almost never satisfies and cannot
Filled the emptiness of the heart
Only true love can overcome that emptiness!
Excellent write!
Love Peace and Hugsss to you...Morning Star
Dan
Love: knowing you have. :)
Beautiful, Eileen, simply marvelous!
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.
Rose
:):) Ch'erie
George
Ted
You are a wonder to read.
Leo
Glorious pearler of a poem Eileen!!
Thank you!
Love, Suzie :-D
this is the difference between love and lust.
lust rarely satisfies and leaves you wanting more to fill the gap that only love can fill.
i lust you never did have that same ring...
well written =)
Love,
Sage