The ephemeral essence of entities eagerly flitting about, on the winds of wishes...like wisps of wonder that seek to wander unknown worlds learning the enigma of evolving elements...ever renewing natures design seeking to capture the cavorting caprice of creation...eagerly embracing the intoxicating intent to invent...myriad millions of masterful minds all wanting part in the dream of design...imagining they have the proper idealism to improve if only the gods will let them make the move
I was tongue tied in this " ephemeral essence of entities
eagerly flitting about, on the winds
of wishes...like wisps of wonder
that seek to wander unknown worlds
learning the enigma of evolving
elements"
You are the Wordsmith here and brava for your poetry.
Love,
Susan
Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on January 8, 2008
This was great. I could envision it all the way. Thanks. Lady J
As we are going into the ethereal's realms we would discover that the void is not empty and that the silence as a loud voice...
...and the poetess quill continues creation with her words.
Georg
From the land of the milked and honeyed here’s a few political faux pas and a bit of attitude exposed to the harsh light of a Canadian who actually has their own opinion.
Ron
eagerly flitting about, on the winds
of wishes...like wisps of wonder
that seek to wander unknown worlds
learning the enigma of evolving
elements"
You are the Wordsmith here and brava for your poetry.
Love,
Susan
Peace,
Dan
Carole~
Walt
Love, Christine
...and the poetess quill continues creation with her words.
Georg
Love the connections and your word power in this one my friend. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.
Be safe,
Karen
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.