NEVER is a very long time!
As your heart will again find!
This sad poem is filled with richness of a caring, loyal and loving heart!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady Shexooo
STay Positive! Love the music and imagery filled picture Eileen!
So true,,, our live's are forever changing,, but the sun comes up, we see clearer,,, and life marches on....Your Poem is of beauty and much sadness.
Love, Christine
Eileen, written with such eloquence and full of spirit. You have a way with words that draws this reader in and she absorbs every word. This is what I call beautiful and excellent.
Love watching
where the drops fall
and like tears,
downs, to touch the pane
we lean on...
Then, a Son shines down. . .
loving me once again
My whethers clearing up
where His love, forever reigns
in a place to take this pain, awash,
presenting me with a cleaner
more clearer view
a renewed drink
of life!
of love!
of rain. . . See where you bring me! Outstanding drops dripping down, where I was allowed to soak, whetted in muse...
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Rainy days do not last forever. May the sunshine break through and cheer up and get you through much better times and days ahead. I am waiting for more sunshine in my life, but I know not in what way. Winning the lottery would be a nice shot of sunshine, too. Well, there has to be better days ahead than the ones I have right now too. Struggling on fighting off depression each day and waiting for peace.
Sad yet I feel love and see beauty amongst your words. I believe rainy days bring this out. Thank you for sharing another beautiful poem with us Eileen.
Newfie Hugs, Rose
Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 18, 2008
Blues down to the nth, Eileen, very well done and characterized . . . I hear a soulful harmonica in the background, me . . .
Chopin, George Sand and Mallorca in Autumn, a piano let melancholic sounds throwgh a slightly open window as the rain taps the sad melody.
ET, you have captured the spirit of that rain...
Although sad, this is beautfiul, Eileen...sometimes a rainy day here and there gives us the inspiration we need to write beautful verse, as you have done here.
(((HUGS))), love and prayer, Eileen - the melancholy falls from your words and floods my heart with sadness - please tell me this isn't reality - if it isn't, you've convinced me it IS - excellent pen.
This is a marvellously crafted write of melancholy, when one is bereft of one's love.. Don't you just hate it when you're stuck in the house with rain pouring down too long!!
Thanks for this and the music Eileen
:):) n Hugs Ch'erie
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As your heart will again find!
This sad poem is filled with richness of a caring, loyal and loving heart!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady Shexooo
STay Positive! Love the music and imagery filled picture Eileen!
colored days on
sunswept shores
Wonderful introspection on your rainy day. Enjoyed! Fabulous sound byte! Richard
Hugs! Jasmin Horst
Love, Christine
The photo is also stunning.
The message, of course, is the best though...
Cryssa
where the drops fall
and like tears,
downs, to touch the pane
we lean on...
Then, a Son shines down. . .
loving me once again
My whethers clearing up
where His love, forever reigns
in a place to take this pain, awash,
presenting me with a cleaner
more clearer view
a renewed drink
of life!
of love!
of rain. . . See where you bring me! Outstanding drops dripping down, where I was allowed to soak, whetted in muse...
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~
Newfie Hugs, Rose
ET, you have captured the spirit of that rain...
Georg
an excellent poem, Eileen, with a positive conclusion.
Love the interior rhymes. - gene.
Karla.
Thanks for this and the music Eileen
:):) n Hugs Ch'erie
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D