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my rainy view
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As the rain

pelted my

windows

and blurred

my view my

 brain was steeped

in fog too

no sense

watching anyway

it was in vain

looking for a

love that had

been slain

my mind went

back to honey

colored days on

sunswept shores

where emerald

seas refreshed us

we embraced with

brazen bliss while

chopin's ballede's

enriched our bodies

 succulent kiss

with memories

such as this

perhaps the

rainy days will

serve to soften

the lonely future

i must endure

for i will never

 love another

etw-2008

 

 


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 Reviews of "my rainy view"
Reviewed on June 22, 2008
NEVER is a very long time!
As your heart will again find!
This sad poem is filled with richness of a caring, loyal and loving heart!
Write On!
Warmest Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady Shexooo

STay Positive! Love the music and imagery filled picture Eileen!

Reviewed by Richard Cederberg
Reviewed on June 19, 2008
honey
colored days on
sunswept shores

Wonderful introspection on your rainy day. Enjoyed! Fabulous sound byte! Richard

Reviewed on June 19, 2008
It got all washed out as I am reading it, send again,
Hugs! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on June 19, 2008
So true,,, our live's are forever changing,, but the sun comes up, we see clearer,,, and life marches on....Your Poem is of beauty and much sadness.
Love, Christine

Reviewed on June 18, 2008
And your words pelt in the windows of my soul just like rain, refreshing my mind with renewed hope and vigor. GBQ.

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on June 18, 2008
I love the form you used in this sad and plaintive poem...
The photo is also stunning.
The message, of course, is the best though...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Barbara Smith
Reviewed on June 18, 2008
Eileen, written with such eloquence and full of spirit. You have a way with words that draws this reader in and she absorbs every word. This is what I call beautiful and excellent.

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on June 18, 2008
So sad, yet the sun will shine again, I'm sure of it!

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on June 18, 2008
Absolutely amazing poem!!!! Makes you wonna cry....you're lines are divine...

Reviewed by Kimmy Van Kooten
Reviewed on June 18, 2008
Love watching
where the drops fall
and like tears,
downs, to touch the pane
we lean on...

Then, a Son shines down. . .
loving me once again
My whethers clearing up
where His love, forever reigns
in a place to take this pain, awash,
presenting me with a cleaner
more clearer view
a renewed drink
of life!
of love!
of rain. . . See where you bring me! Outstanding drops dripping down, where I was allowed to soak, whetted in muse...
Loved it!
Love and Peace~
Kimmy~

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on June 18, 2008
Rainy days do not last forever. May the sunshine break through and cheer up and get you through much better times and days ahead. I am waiting for more sunshine in my life, but I know not in what way. Winning the lottery would be a nice shot of sunshine, too. Well, there has to be better days ahead than the ones I have right now too. Struggling on fighting off depression each day and waiting for peace.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on June 18, 2008
Damp out your way, hon? Either way a sad feeling from this one...ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on June 18, 2008
i love rainy days as they do create a slowing and more pensive atmosphere-enjoyed the write

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on June 18, 2008
So very sad, Tiger Lily.

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on June 18, 2008
'honey colored days' - so beautiful; heartfelt writing that seeps into our pores.

Reviewed by Rose Rideout
Reviewed on June 18, 2008
Sad yet I feel love and see beauty amongst your words. I believe rainy days bring this out. Thank you for sharing another beautiful poem with us Eileen.

Newfie Hugs, Rose

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 18, 2008
Blues down to the nth, Eileen, very well done and characterized . . . I hear a soulful harmonica in the background, me . . .

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on June 18, 2008
Chopin, George Sand and Mallorca in Autumn, a piano let melancholic sounds throwgh a slightly open window as the rain taps the sad melody.
ET, you have captured the spirit of that rain...

Georg

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on June 18, 2008
Although sad, this is beautfiul, Eileen...sometimes a rainy day here and there gives us the inspiration we need to write beautful verse, as you have done here.

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 17, 2008
Powerful love poem and so sad.

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on June 17, 2008
The rainy days worked their magic and inspired
an excellent poem, Eileen, with a positive conclusion.
Love the interior rhymes. - gene.

Reviewed on June 17, 2008
(((HUGS))), love and prayer, Eileen - the melancholy falls from your words and floods my heart with sadness - please tell me this isn't reality - if it isn't, you've convinced me it IS - excellent pen.

Karla.

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on June 17, 2008
This is a marvellously crafted write of melancholy, when one is bereft of one's love.. Don't you just hate it when you're stuck in the house with rain pouring down too long!!

Thanks for this and the music Eileen
:):) n Hugs Ch'erie

Reviewed on June 17, 2008
Marvelous midi and poem, Eileen; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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