Poetic Home For Rent (poem) by Rose M Rideout on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on June 14, 2008

beautifully well penned

Love & peace
William

Reviewed by Christine Alwin

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

This is a very warm poem,, so creative,, I too have not heard of the challenge,, I will check it out....
:)Christine

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

I don't know about Jill's challenge, but this is a lovely write.

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

A marvelous challenge entry, Rose, and what a marvelous ending.

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

Rose,
Your Poetic Home Is Beautiful & All The Experiences Which Built The Foundation & The Walls to your threshold of "Poetic Home For Rent"
Embraced ~ Embrass�
Vickie

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

Well Rose can't afford to rent the whole house, (Revenue Canada took too much of my money) but maybe I can rent a small room in exchange for services rendered. Good entry into Jill's challenge.
hugs
your Cuz
Fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on June 4, 2008

And a great place to make a nest so new poems will born to enrich the house with more sweet mementos.

Georg

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Absolutely wonderful and creative response to what must be a superb challenge! They should use your poem as the welcome mat to this den. Well Done! Deborah:)

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

You took this challenge to heart Rose!;-) Wonderfully done!

ET

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Absolutely lovely and endearing, nice challenge....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

How lovely, I should try this challenge

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Great poem. I love the words from floor to ceiling. I would probably just read the walls and forget to pay the rent. lol. Liz

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Nice response to Jill's challenge, Rose; brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

A beautiful answer to an interesting poetic idea...ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Lois Christensen

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Great poem to answer Jill. Read another one by George Carroll that is very good too. I didn't realize reading George's that he had entered the contest. Now from yours I know a thing is going on and each one writes from their own background and feelings and from their own heart. I loved yours too and think I'd move into yours whenver it was available to rent. Keep writing as graciously as you did here.

Reviewed by Staci Gansky-Wagner

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Very cute poem, I love the metaphor. :)

Reviewed by Joyce Bowling

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Well done, makes one want to move right in! Loved it well written and vrey clever metaphor...write on!
Blessings,
Joyce B.

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Absolutely beautiful - feels like home. :) Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by larry linville

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

I love the metaphor which you develop so creatively. I'd like to rent it but you surely would need to charge more rent than I can afford.

Larry

Reviewed by Jill Eisnaugle

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

Rose,
I'm loving all of the different styles and individual ideas on the "definition" of a poetic home and what such a thing means to each person. Thanks for answering the challenge. I'd rent your "home" in a heartbeat.

Jill

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on June 3, 2008

I didn't read Jill's challenge but you have written a superb piece of poetry in answer to it.