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The Road Ahead
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I want to thank my cousin Fee for having us collaborate on this poem, it is always an honor to work with one of the Dens finest. Thank you Fee, hope you enjoy our words.


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The Road Ahead

By: Rose and Fee

 

The wind whipping in the window

Of that rusted ’69 Chevelle

Muffled sobs by the dash light

Meatloaf singing Bat Out of Hell

 

They had to leave that little town

Under silent cover of the night

Their only choice to sneak away

Whether it was wrong or right

 

So she told him she was working late

He told her bowling with the guys

Just an overnight bag in the trunk

Just one more in a string of lies

 

Guilt soon began to take over

For the shame they’d have to bear

For a love they knew was forbidden

But they had so much love to share

 

He reached out in the darkness

Across the cold naugahyde divide

Took her little hand and kissed it sweet

And she forgot just why she cried

 

They had grown tired of feeling unwanted

At home a stone cold marriage bed

They’d break the vows made to the others

And embrace the open road of love ahead

 

She leaned into his welcome shoulder

Just as that big truck slid round the bend

But the last words she heard him whisper

Is I will love you to the end…

 

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "The Road Ahead"
Reviewed on July 29, 2008
A truly beautiful write sis & cuz. Always said you two work well together.

Love you
Selena

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on July 21, 2008
Great write Rose.

Reviewed on July 20, 2008
Fantasic Colloboration You Two!!
I Love It...the end is so very sad...
as is the cold marital bed...
Very Well Done!
Much Love & Inspiration Rose & Fee :)
Embraced ~ Embrassé
Vickie

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on July 19, 2008
Heartbreaking write, what a wonderful collaboration, Rose & Fee, here's two thumbs up!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on July 19, 2008
Quite a sad tale, you two; but I guess listenin to Meatloaf on the way out wouldn't be too bad.

Reviewed by Mary Patterson
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
Powerful with a sad ending. Well done It really held my attention!......M

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
Wow I was not expecting a tragic ending
Excellent collaboration on this
Brilliant thoughts and Love the
Picture of the old ’69 Chevelle!
Brilliant write!!
Peace Love and light...and hugsss..Morning star

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
We can all relate to the situation in this gem. beautifully written collab!...ET

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
What a tragic story. This is a poem that really hooked me from the beginning hoping for an adventure, not a sudden death. Wow. Brilliant. Liz

Reviewed by Fred Rideout (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
Rose co-wrote a poem with Meatloaf's Bat out of Hell playing on a radio.... I Love Her, but that's not her line. Now if the radio was playing "He Stopped Love'n Her Today" then I would say Rose had something to do with it.....
Only kidding, excellent poem guys.

Reviewed by Christine Alwin
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
wow,,, I love this,,,it really hits home for me in many ways,, well done Rose and Fee!!!!
:)Christine

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
nice car

Reviewed on July 18, 2008
Perfect!! BRAVA! BRAVO!

Love both of your faces~

As always, your Texas friend, Karen Lynn. :D XXXOOOXXXOOO

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
The honour was all mine Cuz, you know I always like working with you and this was your inspiration that you shared with me. thank you,
hugs from down home
Fee

Reviewed by Georg Mateos
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
And that truck will keep on movin'
Nice of you two to collaborate and give us old gizzers a little of sugar.

Georg

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
This is a very good poem.I enjoy reading it.

Edwin

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
great story--captivating throughout!

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
You can't beat real teamwork, as this collaboration proves. -gene.

Reviewed on July 18, 2008
Haunting, beautiful lyrics - especially the last two lines - wow. Undone by the power of your lines - well done, Rose and Fee!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
This poem is very sad, but beautifully structured... it should be submitted somewhere....???? The two of you should conspire more often...hehe... Almost sounded like one of my country songs..... oh wel... guess I just have country on my mind... lindalaw

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
Great poem collaboration from two of the Den's finest poets.

Reviewed by Southern Comfort
Reviewed on July 18, 2008
This was super-dee-duper, YA'LL One minute of special is better then a life time of nothing special! Well, they died happy, with someone they really loved. HUGS! SC


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