An Old Entrance Into The Past
February 16,2009
Written by: Rose Marie Rideout
Into the past she scours alone,
Through the old doorways,
Of what she once called home.
Memories of anguish I heard her say,
With things she's chosen to hide,
Things she must forever put away.
There are few things she cherished there,
One the love and protection of an Angel,
Always willing to keep a family from fear.
The door like a locked jail, it’s dark and gray,
Often conveying tears to her tired eyes,
When her mind commence to stray.
A family each with a torn heart,
Overcome with hurt from birth,
Protected by love of an Angel from the start.
An old entrance into the past,
Haunting memories well hidden,
of a curse, that once was cast.
A childhood fear locked away, alone
Buried behind the dark gray door,
An old entrance into the past, once their home.
Love you sis,
Selena
A compelling write with darkness and light.
Cathlene
With an antique door of choosing,
forgiving won't be losing...
A dark foreboding poem I enjoyed reading!
as I sensed a richness in your writing!
WRITE ON!
Warmest of Blessings and Inner Peace, Warrior Purple Passion Lady SHEExooo
Love,
Christine
Edwin
This Is A Wonderful Poem With Deep Emotions
I Love This Expressive Evoking Style!
Much Love & Poetry
Vickie
Regis
I hear the echoes of a laugh back there and ask myself, from whom?
Very deep and one of your very best!
Georg
Be always safe,
Karen
Love Marion
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :(
The single image of a doorway has triggered wonderful feelings and thoughts in you, I have to agree this is one of your finest, most rewarding pieces. Well done!
John
(((HUGS))) and love, karla.
Love,
Eileen
Hugs
Fee