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Hope You're Missin Me
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I thought this one would make a neat tune and so I put music to it and I must say it sounds pretty good.
Just to let you know I haven't been around too much as Hubby isn't doing the greatest, yes he is back to work, which is a struggle and the Doctor wants him off work for at least two years. I am sure each day will be better then the day before. Until then, he is my top priority. I do love and miss you.


Tell me You’re Missin me
Like I’m’Missin you
October 23, 2010
By Rose Marie Rideout

 
I sat down by the window and I cried,
Wondering again where you had gone.
I’ve asked mysef over again,
What could I have done, that’s so wrong.
Chorus
He says that he loves me but I don’t understand
Where he goes  out alone at night,
if he is just my man.
Tell me you’re missin me, Like I’m missin you,
That’s it’s not for another, that you’d be untrue .
Help wipe those tears you’ve made me cry,
Please tell me darling, help me understand why.


He takes of his coat and stares out the glass,
Though he was searchin for a past,
Tell me you’re missin me, like I’m missin you,
That it’s not for another, we are through..
Somethings just not right, please agree, cause
You’re not getting home till half past three.


Repeat CHORUS


What could I have done,
Yes what could I have done,
What could I have done, that’s so wrong.


 

 

 


Tell me You're Missin me, Like I'm Missin you

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 Reviews of "Hope You're Missin Me"
Reviewed on October 28, 2010
Beautiful, painful ... the perfect song of heartbreak. Well done, Rose.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Morning Star
Reviewed on October 27, 2010
Stopped by to let you know i read it and i love it!

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on October 26, 2010
Sounds like a great Dolly number with just the right country drawl thrown in...well done cuz
fee

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on October 26, 2010
... looks like he ain't gotten too far afield, lookin down the page! :)) You've obviously found the right note to call him on home, Rose... this is swingin'! Get well soon, Fred... but I can see it's pretty tempting to stay home and make sweet, sweet music instead! xx

Reviewed by Dayvid Graybill
Reviewed on October 26, 2010
There is such longing in this piece. Good write Rose. No! Not good night! I said good write!

Peace,
Dayvid

Reviewed by TONY NERONE
Reviewed on October 26, 2010
Now if we just had Tammy. or Reba to sing we would be in business.


GOD BLESS YOU
TONY

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 26, 2010
Your lyrics express a universal and timeless theme, Rose. Thank you for sharing them via your song. I do hope your husband will feel better soon. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by LadyJtalks LadyJzTalkZone (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2010
Been there, Rose, it would make a good song...

Reviewed on October 26, 2010
In the true country tradition of cheatin, hurtin songs, well done!

Reviewed by Fred Rideout (Reader)
Reviewed on October 26, 2010
This is a heel lifing, toe tapping, shoulder swing, hand clapping type of song. Excellent tune to do a puppet dance too.

Loves Ya

Reviewed by Annabel Sheila
Reviewed on October 26, 2010
So sorry to hear about Fred's ill health, Rose! Please know that I'm sending blessings and positive energy your way....sounds like a country hit to me!

Hugs and Warmest Wishes,
Anna

Reviewed by Karen Vanderlaan
Reviewed on October 26, 2010
sad and mournful-good country song!

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on October 26, 2010
Sorry to hear your husband isn't well, Rose, I'm sorry.
Keep your spirits up, you're a strong lady...
and yes, the melody works...good one!

John

Reviewed by Paul Judges
Reviewed on October 26, 2010
A delightful melody indeed, Rose.

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on October 26, 2010
Rose, I can hear this set to a country melody perfectly!

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 26, 2010
Nicely done, Rose.


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