AuthorsDen.com   Join | Login    
Where Authors and Readers come together!

SIGNED BOOKS    AUTHORS    BOOKS    SAMPLE CHAPTERS    AUDIOBOOKS    eBOOKS    STORIES    ARTICLES    POETRY    BLOGS    NEWS    VIDEOS    SUCCESS    TESTIMONIALS

Featured Authors:  Lisa DAnnolfo Levey, iBob Brink, iPatricia Hilliard, iAnita Shaw, iBob Boze, iOdin odin@aflx.com, iJ. Allen Wilson, iRobert Liu, iWilliam Manchee, iJames Harvey, i

  Home > Philosophy > Poetry        Popular: Books, Stories, Articles, Poetry        Authors: A B C D E F G H I J K L M N O P Q R S T U V W X Y Z     

Axilea MU

 Follow Me  

· Contact Me
· Poetry
· 285 Titles
· 3,942 Reviews
· Save to My Library
· Share with Friends!
·
Member Since: Nov, 2006

Axilea MU, click here to update your pages on AuthorsDen.



CAPTIVITY
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
   Not rated by the Author.
Share   Print  Save   Follow   Share on Facebook

- A voice from the past speaks of freedom -

For speaking
the wrong words,
those that echo
the unwanted truth,
they pushed me far away,
until the edge of the world.

In a barge of solitude,
I came to this tower.
Tell me, what are hours
under the rain, on the river,
after the hard journey of a lifetime?

It seems that I became their prisoner,
who now writes graffiti on the wall,
ready to go through this man-made hell,
locked up, yet free at last.

The damp walls around me -
infested -
and their heavy steps in the spiral staircase
are not fearsome, after all.

Should I be frightened
of standing here alone,
when I'm surrounded
by a slowly sinking world?

Life is not addictive
for those free at heart
and the only assistance I require,
is to be one with my peaceful mind.

I've wiped away the notion of time
and given up this broken body.

Today, they come equipped
with breast-rippers, headcrushers,
tongue slicers and cat's paws.
Tomorrow, they'll find
cleaner tools and torture beyond suspicion.

Let me tell you from this tower of pain,
that their methods will change,
but the bigot followers' aim
will always be to make us crawl
then leave us
harmless, as dead, on the floor.

Want to review or comment on this poem?


Need a FREE Reader Membership?


 Reviews of "CAPTIVITY"
Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on February 9, 2008
Vry nice, very nice!!!!!!!! 'Let me tell you from this tower of pain' I love this!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on November 7, 2007
Bravo!!!!

Reviewed by Keith Rowley
Reviewed on October 24, 2007
This is almost unbelieveably haunting, beautiful and poignant. Your soul is a deep well...

Keith

Reviewed on October 24, 2007
Axilea,

The lines,

" ... but the bigot followers' aim
will always be to make us crawl
thenn leave us
harmless, as dead, on the floor."

Are very telling. Excellent!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on October 24, 2007
I love the way you've twisted this paradox into shape -- the shape of a torture tower where a prisoner is free at last "to be one with [her] peaceful mind." Your last phrase is chilling -- reminds me how unique thoughts should be treasured -- how horrible it is when we fail to use that faculty and follow blindly behind whoever wants to lead. Such a mind is as"harmless as dead" for sure. What else do we have minds for? -- or a soul to feel? --Charlie


New Poetry by Axilea MU
Popular Poetry (Philosophy)
  1.  Value of Humility
  2.  Rainbow-Song 2025 (Part 3)
  3.  Accepting Yourself
  4.  heavvy fogg
  5.  Float Your Boat
  6.  What Do I Want?
  7.  Until....
  8.  Falling Off the Mountain
  9.  Land of the Living
  10.  Houses of Cards
  11.  Uncounted
  12.  Footprints in the Snow
  13.  Chapters
  14.  Who I Am
  15.  The 'Voice of Reason' Contends...
  16.  The Fugitive Facets of Being (Faith)
  17.  Power
  18.  Different
  19.  The Dabbler
  20.  Sidewalk Chalk Drawings {for Emma}
Free Book Review Program
Select a book to read and review today!

The Tao of Onliness: An I Ching Cosmology - The Awakening Years by Martin Treon

This book chronicles an infinite allegoric odyssey of Absolute Awakening in which a learned man, a mute man, and a recluse woman are the principal players. The mute and the recluse are the learned one's Teachers and Guides on his journey of Enlighten  
Member BookAds

Uncreated Timeless Self of Radiant Emptiness: Onliness Consciousness by Martin Treon

This book is about a radical transformational Way of Insight, Awakening and Realization to transcendent Self of Nondual Consciousness. If your're interested in transcendental Enlightenment, in Awakening to Nondual Self of Wisdom and Compassion, then  
Member BookAds

Free Download - Bioethics and Population by Sam Vaknin

Issues in the ethics and practice of demography and bioengineering - population control, the right to life, cloning, and abortion.  
Member BookAds