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The Least We Can Do
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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- it's more than it seems -

Two hands
Put together
To gather
Water from the stream.

Fresh water that flows freely.

Fashion magazines,
Posters and sounds,
A tapestry of senses,
To decorate a place of our times.

Lights and colors are studied attentively.

Between
The spring,
The mountain landscape,
Brisk pinewood scent
And
The big city
Codes, dos and don’ts
Of fast walkers in distress…
Humanity stands
For a question
A hyphen
A quotation.

As mortals
What is there for us?
Building a hut
That an earthquake can destroy,
Elaborating theories
That can be proved wrong…

Just
Pushing our minds further,
Our bodies to resist,
Our conscience to exist
For the simple pleasure,
For the basic duty
Of purely trying.


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 Reviews of "The Least We Can Do"
Reviewed on December 2, 2007

When it comes to substantial intellect nourishment and accomplished poetization ~ one can see how they abound in most of the author of "The Least We Can Do" compositions.

In admiration,


Andre Emmanuel Bendavi ben-YEHU

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on December 1, 2007
Excellant Axilea, so much unsaid here or mayhap hidden between the lines just on my peripheal vision...
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Mello Anti (Reader)
Reviewed on December 1, 2007
That was amazing....wow i'm speechless

Reviewed by Kathy Armijo
Reviewed on December 1, 2007
If you don't try, you'll never know if you can ......., this is part of my life's philosophy.

If you think you can, you're right.
If you think you can't, you're right.
Me, I gotta try, try, try cause didn't give me this life to just sit, do nothing, and die.

God bless you. Kathy

Reviewed by Walt Hardester
Reviewed on December 1, 2007
A funny thing I have noticed is that when someone lives in the city, saying they love all the hustle and bustle...They always long to get to the country, where they can find peace, and the quiet noise of nature.....go figure.

Walt

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on December 1, 2007
Humanity--I love what Leo said, and I can't help playing off the word. If we look at it--separate "human" from the rest of the word, we realize how "itty" we really are. And the paradox is, that the more we realize how insignificant, "itty" we are, the bigger-hearted we become--the more we see why we have to help each other-- the more humane we become. 'Course "humane" has an "e" on the end--I have no idea what that means...

Reviewed by Keith Rowley
Reviewed on November 30, 2007
Colour v.s darkness, effort vs. apathy, life vs. futility. There indeed more here than it seems...

keith

Reviewed by Leo Durrant
Reviewed on November 30, 2007
Better a hyphen or a quotation than an asterisk or (worse yet) a footnote. But then, you probably don't mean humanity. You mean Humanity. It's too bad the one is so lacking within the other.
If only we would truly try.
After all, it is the least we can do.

Well put.
Leo


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