Stunning use of images, questions... and ultimately meaning.
You have a gift, my lady.
Isn't there more of a bio you can offer?
Rick A.

Even within the desert sands there is that same question of where...you place those simple questions within a poem and they seem like the elusive answers to all the worlds problems...

if we have it all
what do we desire?

Just these words can fill the mind with a process of turmoil catching one off gaurd and sending that mind weary imagination into a spin of chasing solutions...

nice...

very nice Axilea...

Art Sun...

Cool write. Specially love the ending of that poem.
Makes me think.
Amira

thought provoking!
I especially loved the second and third stanzas... okay, the fourth one too...
You managed to draw the slower paced time of a truly "wireless" age with your words.

Cryssa

Thought provoking for me. How does one get away these days. I would have to pack up too many conveniences and then would I really be getting away? Powerful, profound write. Liz

Interesting concept as the mind continues to ponder....

Be always safe,
Karen

aw the slow trudge [away]....in a dream like procession....nice and easy.....leading to........a .nice.......write,
stan

Aixilea - Powerful poem - strong and effective images as always -

liked the intriguing question;

- if we have it all
what do we desire? -

and the paradox of:

If everything is here
where is away?

-David

What a unique and interesting question, Axilea!
You have such an 'in-depth' poetic 7th sense about you.

Interesting thoughts and questions...enjoyed, blessings, Holly

Wow. If such a caravan could come, bringing bottles of dreams... who cares how much it cost. I read somewhere that spices from the Indies were worth more than a hull full of gold. Could you imagine if you could sprinkle a little in your morning poridge-- over a deli sandwhich-- stir it into gravy-- see for a few hours the old rich shades of earthy colours replacing the plastic cut-and-dried shades we package everything with today...?

So true that we've traded the beauty of waiting-- the virtue of patience for packaged NOW. Anticipation is a wonderful thing, but it's becoming scarce.

You bring the truth out beautifully as always, Axilea. Good work.
--Charlie

Sweet connectivity once more .~. evollove _ Ted

Interesting and wonderous thoughts as to our existance and being. Love the last line especially...If everything is here..where is away?

hugs
Fee