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Our Tangible Hearts
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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- For Charlie -

Have you seen
the snow, so rare, on top of
Mount Vesuvius?

Have you felt the refreshing warmth
of the paradoxical Mediterranean Sea?

When you are sitting, dreaming of the world,
feeling its fabric,
carried by a concave scent
traveling in a boat that sets you free,
you can come to me.

Immaterial perfection,
we both know that, sister,
is not part of this world
so
our meeting is the product
of our very mistakes
and
our will to improve
- ripening figs I ate
a taste I can share with you -

The only reason
why our souls can speak and listen
to each other
is because no matter how far you are,
a sigh, a whisper,
a fever, a frown,
a trace on white paper
and tangible hearts
make ethereal contents come
together.


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 Reviews of "Our Tangible Hearts"
Reviewed on May 21, 2008
This lyrical poem, especially the evocative line '...no matter how far you are,' within the final gradation style stanza, brought to mind a section of Yoko Ono's Air Talk:
'No matter how close we are there's always air between us,
It's also nice that air is something we all share,
No matter how far apart we are an air links us...'

It's upon the crest of this ethereal air that our souls communicate their mentally tangible attributes and traits.

Thought provoking.
David

Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on May 16, 2008
Love for you brother, and also for your fellow man shows in this poem. Encouragement too and love so true. Feeling from the heart and giving him a start.

Reviewed by Harry Rensby
Reviewed on May 14, 2008
This is the thing about poetry that works; it's so very personal but can be experienced as real, sensitive, sensual, amused feeling by a stranger at literal ethereal distance. Come together right now, over e.

Reviewed by Miriam Dufer (Reader)
Reviewed on May 5, 2008
This poem shows the dynamic relationship between sisters and the point that relationships have an ebb and flow that always leads to a connection beyond the physical (Spirit, Heart and Mind)

Reviewed by ~ Holly Harbridge (Reader)
Reviewed on April 30, 2008
You are an extrodinary writer, keep up the fantastic work! Holly

Reviewed by Michelle Mead
Reviewed on April 27, 2008
A lovely beautiful dedication.

Reviewed by neerja gandhi (Reader)
Reviewed on April 27, 2008
great work ,lovely write..sharing thoughts

Reviewed by Debra Baker
Reviewed on April 26, 2008
Beautiful and captivating the sisters of this poem. Maybe twins...eternal...still sister's where heart can touch the depths of each ones being. Lovely write!

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on April 25, 2008
Friends whose hearts are as one...sisters by heart...
I love the flow of this poem. The last stanza is my favorite...
Cryssa

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on April 25, 2008
Such depth and insight and meeting of the souls. Awesome. Liz

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on April 24, 2008
The real power of the heart can't be figured in real life. Quantum physics is when the heart can pull off miracles for people. This is a beautiful poem One of my favorites!
Blessings and love,
Susan

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo
Reviewed on April 24, 2008
How very true and beautiful is this piece...

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed on April 24, 2008
Axilea -

Stunning - perfectly imaged in verse - I am undone by the beauty of these lines - well done.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on April 24, 2008
Very nice!!!!!!!!!!!!!! '...Our souls can speak and listen'.... I love this!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on April 24, 2008
Axilea,

A beautiful piece. All laid out in black and white. Peace, Love and Blessings Always, Paul.

Reviewed by Ted Bossis
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
Magnets of warmth here .~. as always )( beautified _ evol smaerd * Ted

Reviewed by Dawn Anderson
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
You write with such imagery, such beauty, such expression. Beautiful...as always.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
Such warmth and tenderness expressed in this write for the lover who is absent and yet always close by...
hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
I hung my dreams out on the line today.
They got a good airing-out.
white-hemmed edges billow out like sails in the breeze...

and I, on the inside looking out,
climbed inside my gravy boat,
and I rowed to some faraway shore
with my ladle-oar...

I paddled though grass raspy-dry,
and waist-deep--

(the rest is on my site) Thank you, Sister!

--Charlie

Reviewed by Bernice Angoh
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
Absolutely beautiful piece!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
When I left this poem Our Tangible Hearts, I was in better condition than I arrived! This is soul journey. These things you speak of are so true. Whenever your readers visit your page, we're bound to get a deep thought worth pondering, Axilea. Be well always. Blessed Be.

Warmly,
Sage

Reviewed by Deborah Munson (Reader)
Reviewed on April 23, 2008
Beautiful tribute to one named Charlie. The words that flow from your being, forming such eloquent designs are amazing. You are amazing. Well Done! Deborah


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