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Capitals of Love
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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Love letters from
Your inner sea -
Salt and floating on the surface -
The memory of tears
Produces a smile, now sweet,
Where the shimmering coat
Reaches that line
You call the horizon.
For me, it is lifted by the sky:
A secret path behind the invisible
Opens.
Time doesn’t matter,
(It’s a game we no longer play)
Only those whispers
Of fresh water
And your words
Finally capitalized
In my inner sea.

 

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "Capitals of Love"
Reviewed by Richard Atwood
Reviewed on October 4, 2008
Love this poem.
Have you been published? You should be...!
Rick A.

Reviewed by Cryssa C
Reviewed on August 23, 2008
love the ending...
Your poems always have a way of coming together in the end with a thought-provoking idea or thought...

Cryssa

Reviewed by Art Hernandez
Reviewed on August 23, 2008
The transformation of love from one to the other is as the sea you speak of...from within the heart where endless waves of thoughts that grasp the mind and captivate the very essence of love...from one sea into the other the final blending of thought is found...

nice work Axilea...

Art Sun...

Reviewed by Keith Rowley
Reviewed on August 20, 2008
Evocative. I tasted the salt of tears flowing through my mind.

Reviewed by Amber Moonstone
Reviewed on August 20, 2008
Very lovely, You always make me feel good after reading your poetry.
Peace, love, and light,


Amber "V"

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green
Reviewed on August 19, 2008
L o v e . i t !

Reviewed by Gianetta Ellis (Reader)
Reviewed on August 19, 2008
My favorite: "A secret path behind the invisible
Opens."
Lovely writing, Axilea.

Reviewed by E. Farrand (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2008
"Time doesn’t matter,
(It’s a game we no longer play)"

I love that line.

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on August 18, 2008
Whoa, my mind ran away and caught a whiff of a bit of passion secreted away. Excellent. Liz

Reviewed by manny moreno
Reviewed on August 18, 2008
good you have someone happy for you

Reviewed by Linda Law
Reviewed on August 18, 2008
this is very special, and written quite well. lindalaw

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 18, 2008
Welcome back and what a splash you make with this wonderful write that combines my favorite passions...poetry and the ocean.

hugs
Fee

Reviewed by Vesna Perkovic (Reader)
Reviewed on August 18, 2008
Absolutely stupendous!!
Love it..
MY kind of poetryQ

Than kyou Axilea

Blessings,

Vesna

Reviewed on August 18, 2008
GORGEOUS, Axilea, GORGEOUS! You make poetry seem effortless. =] Well done!

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on August 18, 2008
Axilea - Enjoyed these words about and from your "inner sea." I especially liked,

Time doesn’t matter,
(It’s a game we no longer play)

- David

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on August 18, 2008
There you go, reminding me of magic beans-- personal ones that grow much larger and fantastically when cast at the right time--the right place-- and watered by the right stuff. From such stalks, grow poems like this. Healing. --Charlie

Reviewed on August 18, 2008
Beautiful write, Axilea; well done!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D


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