A tribute (to tomorrow) (poem) by Axilea MU on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on May 7, 2009

Great words, my friend, great poem it is one of the greatest I read in a while. Been missing you too, but glad I found you tonight. Happy Mother's Day in Turkey on Sunday.

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on April 10, 2009

a tribute to the end
the true beginning...
Says it all, and you filled it with much more!
UNFORGETTABLE!
Thought provoking and intriguing is your writing style Axilea, I feel I want to get in your head, heart and spirit!
WRITE ON!

Warmest Blessings of Love, Peace, and Warm Hugs, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo

Reviewed by Charlie

Reviewed on March 23, 2009

Reading this feels like a good, decent rain-- refreshing. My favorite line: "ire iron hurt"
--love the alliteration there, and the acrid taste of it in my brain. --Charlie

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price

Reviewed on March 11, 2009

Thought provoking and compelling. Your writing just draws the reader from one word to the next in a rush for more. Excelent. Liz

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on March 5, 2009

the last stanza is your gift in this fine piece...
true words of brilliance, Axilea, excellent!

Reviewed by Keith Rowley

Reviewed on February 25, 2009

the violence of weak warriors
honorless

And you my dear are the essence of poetic excellence.

Keith

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle

Reviewed on February 24, 2009

Great poem,fantastic work,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by David Hightower

Reviewed on February 24, 2009

Axilea - another thought provoking poem. Admire the way the structure of the poem imitates its message. The first lines:

beginning with the end,
the pencil
scratches the surface

and the last lines:

then cool ashes
soothing
turned into paper
on which
the faithful line is written
...the lining of tomorrow

to arrive at:

a tribute to the end
the true beginning...

- David

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on February 23, 2009

The thought becomes written through the lining of tomorrow--neat.

Ron

Reviewed by John Flanagan

Reviewed on February 23, 2009

Axilea,
Time past is time present...the undercurrents of 'quartets' suggested but you make it distinctly your own, that unique voice I so admire. As always, simply excellent.
John

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on February 23, 2009

A provocative look at tomorrow, Axilea.
The struggle ends in my beginning...?

-gene.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on February 23, 2009

Deep and thought awakening write that definately plays to the physcology of the poet and writer. Well done Axiulea...
Fee

Reviewed by Liana Margiva

Reviewed on February 23, 2009

WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on February 22, 2009

This write speaks to me of parts of the whole, resulting in the circles of destiny.........thought provoking indeed, pax A

Reviewed by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

Reviewed on February 22, 2009

STUNNING composition, Axilea - undone by the wonder of your imaginative pen - thank you. Beautiful.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.