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A tribute (to tomorrow)
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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beginning with the end,
the pencil
scratches the surface
paper soul
movement breath
words of air

the last written line
from a cloud of yesterday
raining dreams of electricity
a raging storm of thoughts
that needs the quiet dawn

the line written - the fence:
protection of today -
from  chemicals in the brain
spring more memories
the violence of weak warriors
honorless

sold their soul to enter
the land of  uprightness
towers erected centuries before
(since then
only peace)

until they tried to break in
disguised
looking alike in the streets at night
grey conformity the chloroform
to dupe placid citizens
and a gift
that brought a soft smile
to the loyal lips

the fire of hate
unable to placate
ire iron hurt
and burning cry
of deceit

then cool ashes
soothing
turned into paper
on which 
the faithful line is written
...the lining of tomorrow



a tribute to the end
the true beginning...

 

 

 


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 Reviews of "A tribute (to tomorrow)"
Reviewed by Lois Christensen
Reviewed on May 7, 2009
Great words, my friend, great poem it is one of the greatest I read in a while. Been missing you too, but glad I found you tonight. Happy Mother's Day in Turkey on Sunday.

Reviewed on April 10, 2009
a tribute to the end
the true beginning...
Says it all, and you filled it with much more!
UNFORGETTABLE!
Thought provoking and intriguing is your writing style Axilea, I feel I want to get in your head, heart and spirit!
WRITE ON!

Warmest Blessings of Love, Peace, and Warm Hugs, Warrior Purple Lady SHEExooo

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on March 23, 2009
Reading this feels like a good, decent rain-- refreshing. My favorite line: "ire iron hurt"
--love the alliteration there, and the acrid taste of it in my brain. --Charlie

Reviewed by Elizabeth Price
Reviewed on March 11, 2009
Thought provoking and compelling. Your writing just draws the reader from one word to the next in a rush for more. Excelent. Liz

Reviewed by Dale Clark
Reviewed on March 5, 2009
the last stanza is your gift in this fine piece...
true words of brilliance, Axilea, excellent!

Reviewed by Keith Rowley
Reviewed on February 25, 2009
the violence of weak warriors
honorless

And you my dear are the essence of poetic excellence.

Keith

Reviewed by Edwin Hurdle
Reviewed on February 24, 2009
Great poem,fantastic work,take care

Edwin

Reviewed by David Hightower
Reviewed on February 24, 2009
Axilea - another thought provoking poem. Admire the way the structure of the poem imitates its message. The first lines:

beginning with the end,
the pencil
scratches the surface

and the last lines:

then cool ashes
soothing
turned into paper
on which
the faithful line is written
...the lining of tomorrow

to arrive at:

a tribute to the end
the true beginning...

- David

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on February 23, 2009
The thought becomes written through the lining of tomorrow--neat.

Ron

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on February 23, 2009
Axilea,
Time past is time present...the undercurrents of 'quartets' suggested but you make it distinctly your own, that unique voice I so admire. As always, simply excellent.
John

Reviewed by Gene Williamson
Reviewed on February 23, 2009
A provocative look at tomorrow, Axilea.
The struggle ends in my beginning...?

-gene.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on February 23, 2009
Deep and thought awakening write that definately plays to the physcology of the poet and writer. Well done Axiulea...
Fee

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on February 23, 2009
WONDERFUL!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on February 22, 2009
This write speaks to me of parts of the whole, resulting in the circles of destiny.........thought provoking indeed, pax A

Reviewed on February 22, 2009
STUNNING composition, Axilea - undone by the wonder of your imaginative pen - thank you. Beautiful.

(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.


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