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Glyph
by Axilea MU → (All Poetry by Axilea MU)
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                     it has been raining

it has been raining for too long

and we bathe in sorrow

still able to see the refraction of light

                     drop after drop

                     after drop

 

a Language

mauve movement color wave

sweet violence of purple sound

ultra-violet, beyond the spectrum

of human emotions that we feel

not anesthetized by the esthetics

of the androgynous dream

 

We have been writing

struggling for the right

of the primeval word on wet paper

on torn flesh, tears that carry away

the ink of fading words

/

We are resistance fighters

redeeming signs

of nearly erased memory

that we have been recreating

 

a Link

where many lost their sense

of being one with meaning

blank as the emptied sky

as the wiped-out conscience

at the dead end of time

/

it has been raining

with windscreen wipers

and frenetic swords

the words have fallen

backwards

 

in Need

of holy sentiment

we cry them back

into the spring where they belong

written, spoken, re-written

the old syntax making sense.

 

 


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 Reviews of "Glyph"
Reviewed by KJ McPhee
Reviewed on August 10, 2014
THERE'S A LOT TO TAKE IN HERE - A DIALOGUE BETWEEN THE FLESH AND THE SPIRIT AND THE SEASONS, COVERS THE SPECTRUM FOR ME!

Reviewed by Christine Tsen
Reviewed on March 17, 2013
Such apt usage of symbols and symbolism, such poetic musicality!
Blessings, xx
Christine

Reviewed by Amor Sabor
Reviewed on March 13, 2013
You have not lost your touch...this piece evokes emotions and images in the deepest curves of the skies above the clouds realm.

Reviewed by Alan Abrams
Reviewed on March 11, 2013
this one soars on outstretched wings

Reviewed on March 9, 2013
another powerful piece.

Reviewed by stan nassano
Reviewed on March 9, 2013
Nicely done again,Axilea....great visuals and flow..thanks

Reviewed by Jon Willey
Reviewed on March 9, 2013
Axilea, the contributions of glyphs to the roots of myriad languages is a fascinating story within itself. My sense of your poem is that it alludes to those literary contributions and also wraps in the realm of human emotions enhanced by their application, love not the least of them. A refreshing perspective written with aplomb. I wish you love and peace my dear friend. Jon Michael

Reviewed by Odin odin@aflx.com
Reviewed on March 9, 2013
This is the kind of thinking and posturing of convictions that poetry readers need more of. Far too much posted material from other writers is of questionable worth, but this piece begs to be read often as a reminder of the complexity of the serious writer's need to work, rework, and then rework again the choice of words to express something, as you have, that is worth remembering. Thank you for the read.

Reviewed by Liana Margiva
Reviewed on March 9, 2013
EXCELLENT!!!!!!!!!!! '...we bathe in sorrow'---- I LOVE THIS!!!!...'tears that carry away the ink of fading words'--- MOST TALENTED!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Liana Margiva

Reviewed by Charlie
Reviewed on March 8, 2013
Oh, but that's beautiful...to take now words, and turn them back into their essential meanings. That's the job of the writers of words. You're right (write?) it has been raining for far too long, where words become mere words, and have somehow lost their meanings. I believe there was a time--in the beginning--when there were worlds within words, and worlds were made by words, or by Word, not mere bywords of meaningless, selfish, androgynous mouth-gushings. The Wor(l)d-- a big bang? Maybe. One wor(l)d--a "sweet violence of purple sound". Your words are very creative, expounding upon soundings.

And this creator said-- let there be a poem. And there was a poem. And it was good. --ChARliE

Reviewed by D. Vegas (Reader)
Reviewed on March 8, 2013
Raining, resistance fighters, a language, a link, in need. Many connotations implied...again a wonderful piece!

Always,

Deborah

Reviewed by Chip Bergeron
Reviewed on March 8, 2013
Very powerful poem Axilea. So much power in words we release, then take up again and fold them back in on themselves. It's how we make meaning ofmouyr lives.

ChipB

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on March 8, 2013
Your words give much to the reader, substance to reflect upon. This poem is worthy of much more than a single reading. Thank you, Axilea. Love and best wishes,

Regis

Reviewed by Ronald Hull
Reviewed on March 8, 2013
I do not fully understand what you have written, but I enjoyed reading it for the way it's written, nonetheless.

Ron

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on March 8, 2013
I love the line..."We are resistance fighters..." This is a powerfully written poem.
Cheers,
Dan

Reviewed by John Flanagan
Reviewed on March 8, 2013
to me, Axilea, very good timing,
highly appropriate for International Womens Day;
'glyph' is at the root of many creative processes,
shaping materials and words, bringing ideas to
- the favourite of the Art critics - 'resolved works'

i especially like the call at the end

john

Reviewed by RWE SAYS BYE (Reader)
Reviewed on March 7, 2013
"...resistance fighters redeeming signs of nearly erased memory that we have been recreating..." lovely lines ... so lovely they might be truer than true... brings to mind another old line from the Eagles "The Long Run": "We can handle some resistance, if our love is a strong one."... Is that part of the "holy sentiment" we are in need of? As we cry ourselves back "into the spring" we have to ask whether they or we or then ever really belongs to the now where the "old syntax [makes] sense" or whether there is a fresh rivulet being forged in the fearlessness of our forevermorning daybreaking over and over the edgy horizons in my auburnt bridges on whose engineered defeat I will never look back for fear of losing sight of what lies ahead beyond tomorrow's sun shadowing the dark side of your eyes as you pierce me til I bleed love with your penetrating gaze. Pardon me: it's just my "syntax making sense."

Resonant write, Axilea!

Reviewed by Budd Nelson
Reviewed on March 7, 2013
it does make sense in it's own way
budd


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