They wheedled fire
from green trees;
smoke emerged
reluctantly,
child-like as on
an unwanted errand.
It cuddled slowly
round the edge of
a long valley where
spritely young trees
were being nurtured
by an Italian Spring;
where gleaming moss clothed
ancient, pitted rocks
as snow melted slowly.
We shared the wide-awake sky
with hills, unaltered from times
when pagan Marsi claimed the soil,
made their celebration
with rites of dedication
and centuries of toil.
Time flew;
from the barbecue
we made a bee-line
in a very fast car
for a bar
where they sold
coffee, tea, wine,
beer (icy cold),
a three-decker sandwich
and, for the crowd,
played very loud
songs in a foreign language.
Love the imagery, Patrick! This is such a wonderful write!
Hugs,
Victoria
Reviewed by Katy Walsvik (Reader)
Reviewed on May 13, 2003
"...cuddled slowly..."/"...wide-awake sky..."/ the ENTIRE first verse! Stop me or you will get the whole poem back at you! (smile).. I absolutely loved this one.. it's packed with expressions, visions, images, mind pictures.. (em.. I love ice cold beer.. hehe). I just went ahead and plopped down in this one.. wonderful, Patrick! katy.
After a long awaited weekend visitation caused by false allegations of sexual abuse, Glen got to see his children for the first time in over two months. He promised them that they would never be apart again and then they disappeared.
TRUE STORY. Bella survived an abusive powerbroker father with organized crime ties, a drug-addicted mother and a physically/sexually abusive brother. Shocking & inspirational. When she couldn't cry, she tattooed a crying angel to cry for her.
Hugs,
Victoria
May Lu $*_*$ / Sandie Angel :o)