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On The Stage
by Rose Loya → (All Poetry by Rose Loya)
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(lyrics to a song for a play I'm working on, who knows how long it will take to finish, but I keep working on it...)

MOTHER On the stage, on the stage I've got to be up on the stage and if I could, I'd run away but I've got to be up on the stage DAUGHTER I On the stage, on the stage I want to be up on the stage and if I could, I'd run away somewhere to be up on that stage MOTHER On the stage, on the stage, I've HAVE to be up on the stage, all of my bills won't go away, so, my duty is on the stage DAUGHTER II On the stage, on the stage, I've got to be up on the stage, TOO and by God, I will find a way to be somewhere up on the stage MOTHER The filter that I use to keep my babies safe in back of me for some reason is not working damn it, if I'll let it be MOTHER (spoken)Besides.... It's a phase, it's a phase, anyway, I think I'm late but if I could, I would erase, my being on that blasted stage DAUGHTER I Not a phase, Mommy stay, listen to me, I hope and pray, you understand I can't erase, wanting to be up on the stage MOTHER The filter that I used to keep, my babies took away from me and damn it, I don't want to see or hear what they're telling me... MOTHER AND DAUGHTERS On the stage, on the stage, I've got to be up on the stage and if I could, I'd run away somewhere to be up on the stage REPEAT, THEN END WITH LAST LINE: MOTHER somewhere to be up on the stage DAUGHTERS somewhere to be up on the stage copyright 2007 Rose Loya      


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 Reviews of "On The Stage"
Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 28, 2007
An engaging song, Rose. Well done. Best of good wishes with your play. Love and peace to you,

Regis

Reviewed by Patricia Bankhead (Reader)
Reviewed on August 26, 2007
Wonderful writing Rose
Enjoyed reading...Pat

Reviewed by Larry Lounsbury
Reviewed on August 25, 2007
Sounds like you have captured the spirit of the typical mother daughter interaction. Enjoyed

Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on August 25, 2007
Rose, two thoughts. Check for typos, I know, we all have them but once corrected, it is much easier to read. And I agree with Felix that there needs to be some clarification.

All in all I think it is an intensly good write and want to see more.

Thanks,
Dan

Reviewed by Chantilly Lace (Reader)
Reviewed on August 25, 2007
Wonderful writing Rose,Hugssssssss

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on August 25, 2007
Interesting and good layout, I am not too sure on the part about the filter...maybe some clarification? I love the mother/daughter interaction and how it seems to go from adoration to bitterness.
As always Rose...strong lyrics would love to hear it when put to music.

fee

Reviewed by K. Mulroney
Reviewed on August 25, 2007
Very nice! Reads like a song from a Broadway play. Can almost see the dancing. Glad I stopped by!


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