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Altogether
by Rose Loya → (All Poetry by Rose Loya)
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(not anything I'm going through at the moment, but it's kind of snappy, in a breakup-kind-of way)

calling you’s a good idea,

might make me feel better,

might put out this sappy mood,

or I could write a letter,

 

that’do the trick

and make this fit

today feel a bit better,

or I could say goodbye

to you and heartache

altogether

 

maybe if I see your face

one more time, I’ll see through

all the lies you say to me

and how I’m made a fool

 

so easily, but can’t today,

unless of course you call

but then, hell, I'll come out to play

and give to you my all,

 

that is until the next day when you leave, until you need

the physicality you get from me

and then I’ll bleed

again,

 

‘cause I’m a glutton for what’s under

your cold spell

and all the lies you give to me

that fool me way too well….

 

calling me’s a good idea,

I’ll make you feel better,

I’ll put out your crappy mood

while sneaking in my letter,

 

maybe that trick

will make you fit

out of my day much better,

watch while I say goodbye to this heartache

altogether,

 

watch me while I say goodbye

to heartache

altogether

 

Copyright 2008 Rose Loya

 

 


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 Reviews of "Altogether"
Reviewed by D Johnson
Reviewed on April 14, 2008
And don't look back...good write.

Peace,
Dan

Reviewed on April 14, 2008
YOur hooked child admit it, liked your lines Rose.
Bless ya! Jasmin Horst

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 13, 2008
I'm on your side on this one... ...if I may. Love and best wishes,

Regis


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