I love this one, beautiful useage of I don't have enough english backround to state it properly but the application of common sentence structure applied to relationship/fantasy meaning. The concept is one that never dawned on me, I like it, very refreshing read! Amy.
This was simply brilliant the way
you describe feelings for the reader
to ponder in their own lives. The
music was perfect behind your words.
A very creative piece of writing.
Sorry, I was caught up in the music...this is a perfect write and pity the poor fool that was lost in his verbosity, he will never be able to appreciate what splendor he allowed to slip away.
No Baby Girl, He was a cowardly, nightmare and you are TOO GOOD, for that ole slime bucket! Reality Check: YOU ARE BEAUTIFUL YOU ARE WONDERFUL and ONLY DESERVE THE CREAM OF THE CROP. YOU DESERVE A HERO, NOT A ZERO! I LOVE YOU! Sissy
How to Be Happy Partners is the perfect tool for designing and creating a relationship unique to your individual personalities and situation. Written by the authors of How to Be a Couple and Still Be Free, this is a clear and concise handbook on how
I met Jerome on a busy city street in Baltimore, Maryland, when he was forty-five years old. On that particular day, I was out and about, enjoying a much-needed day off from work.
I wanted to purchase a sukiyaki sub. I parked my car in an area of
How to Be Happy Partners is the perfect tool for designing and creating a relationship unique to your individual personalities and situation. Written by the authors of How to Be a Couple and Still Be Free, this is a clear and concise handbook on how
you describe feelings for the reader
to ponder in their own lives. The
music was perfect behind your words.
A very creative piece of writing.
Love,
Katherine
Love Tinka
Perfection to say the least..
yup, there's only ONE La Belle Rouge! YAY!
saved this one..
Vesna:)
I especially like this stanza
if i close my eyes and mind
i can smell sandalwood and sweat
i can ride that train of thought
through each junction of pleasure
to the exclamation point of ecstasy
Fabulous....
Thanks,
Dan
This is word usage at it's best my friend.
(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D
(((HUGS))) and love, Karla.