Cemetery At Dawn (poem) by La Belle Rouge Poetess Of The Heart on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Poetess of The Soul Sheila G

Reviewed on July 13, 2009

My FAVORITE TIME < I love the eeriness and this POEM!
Glad I didn't miss this ONE!
The picture is forever in my minds soul...
Our word-expressions wrap me UP and Keep me warm!

WRITE ON!
Blessings, SassySHEE

Reviewed by Phyllis Jean Green

Reviewed on July 8, 2009

Oh, La Belle, this is b e a u t i f u l. So sensitive, and you are a genius with rhyme. Always stay you! <3 'Pea' <3

Reviewed by Gene Williamson

Reviewed on July 8, 2009

Dust to dust...yet the essence of who we are/were
lives on beyond the cool clay and faded flowers in
the quiet thoughts and words left behind. You tell
it like it is, with music to match. -gene.

Reviewed by ~ H (Reader)

Reviewed on July 8, 2009

Gentle & serene, (at rest)

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on July 8, 2009

Well said and put into words, La Belle.

Reviewed by Georg Mateos

Reviewed on July 7, 2009

A morbid poetess wrapped in a gossamer white gown sliding through the city of the dead like a lonely angel looking for a soul that didn't part.
Deep pain and hopelessness not only in the poems words.

Georg

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 7, 2009

Great reflective write, Belle; well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your friend in Tx., Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Beryl McMullen

Reviewed on July 7, 2009

Such reflection La Belle in the quietness of the Cemetery

Reviewed by Dallas D'Angelo-Gary

Reviewed on July 7, 2009

Well said, La Belle! The mood music fits very well with this.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on July 7, 2009

Solemn, respectful but also open and true in it's honesty for how quickly do gravesites get replaced in memories replaced.

hugs
fee

Reviewed by Karen Palumbo

Reviewed on July 7, 2009

Reaching out and touching upon the souls who have come before....

Be always safe,
Karen

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 7, 2009

Sounds to be a great description of passing away, maybe it can be incorporated into a funeral service...e

Reviewed by Jms Bell

Reviewed on July 7, 2009

YOUR PRESENTATION (MUSIC) ENHANCES AN ALREADY WELL WRITTEN POEM, WITH YOUR PHRASES AND RHYME DRAWING A CLEAR PICTURE OF DEATH'S BITTERSWEET REWARDS. ENJOYED IMMENSELY. THANKS FOR SHARING AND GOD BLESS. JOYCE

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater

Reviewed on July 7, 2009

Tribute to all departed souls who have met the soil at six feet under. Each one of these quatrains are measurable as timeless pall bearers, Belle...laid to rest and free of all materialism, on to the afterlife where chains are left to those of us here on Earth...good poetry...and music...

Love,
Sage

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on July 7, 2009

this is beautifully clear-eyed and reflective, Belle. Quite sombre in tone, though with a lightness of touch that indeed captures the duallisms which co-exist quite happily in graveyards, serving to add to our ponderings, rather than answer them. You speak of that ambivalence in a vivid capture of memorial scenery that is sharply observed and felt. This poem breathes easy and is at peace. xx