is it so wrong to love you?
if it is a sin then....
I am a great sinner
for I have no choice
but to love you
the heart goes where
the reason dare not travel
and when the mind is silenced
dreams are swift chariots of love
they transport me
to where you are
those places neither of us inhabit
except in the soft shadows
of dreams, where kisses
still remain so strangely familiar
and dangerously real
is it a sin to love you?
if so.... I am damned
So many have followed your lament. As no danger, in itself, was loving and erotic. A primal pull toward the unknown, the dangerous. It takes courage to enter into such a relationship, and courage to write about it after.
This is TENDERLY beautiful romance as only you can write. So much goes into every line. But in particular, these lines are the most striking for me...
"the reason dare not travel
and when the mind is silenced
dreams are swift chariots of love
they transport me
to where you are"
Amor
Reviewed by Dark Knight (Reader)
Reviewed on March 1, 2011
to love a woman as sexy and as talented as you la Belle cannot be wrong
The sense of commitment is very fine, Belle,
that going for it and to hell with the consequences...and yet your tone is relaxed, gentle and calmly persuasive.
This throbs with pain and is reality for me. I think you have written something so exquisite, reaching the intimate level of the soul.
Blessings,
Christine
HAUNTING...BITTERLY BEAUTIFUL AND WHAT IS SO REMARKABLE IS THAT WE CANNOT BEGIN TO COUNT THE MEN AND WOMAN THAT ARE, OR, ONCE WERE...SO DAMNED. LINGERING THOUGHTS WITH JUST THE RIGHT MELODY...ALWAYS LABELLE. THANK YOU FOR SHARING. LOVE, BLESSINGS AND FAITH...
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
Forbidden desire perhaps a query is it so wrong unearths the answer, Belle. Always, you take us to those emotions of which we ask of ourselves. That's what good poetry can do, make us, your readers query our own hearts. I think this piece comes from the soul mate you have who resides in you from such ancient times. Be well La Belle.
Wow- I relate too well to these words.
You made me look over my shoulder- in case you were watching.
So- where is this salvation thing?
I will be looking for it- maybe...it is deeper still.
Belle, this is just so deeply moving. The music and your poem touches me deeply. I have such love also, and I so can relate to the depth of your passionate heart.
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"the reason dare not travel
and when the mind is silenced
dreams are swift chariots of love
they transport me
to where you are"
Amor
the reason dare not travel
How so very true, for so many, so often.
that going for it and to hell with the consequences...and yet your tone is relaxed, gentle and calmly persuasive.
John
an moving read, LA Belle ...
Blessings,
Christine
Newfie Hugs, Rose
JOYCE * HIS INSPIRATIONS
in my admiration for your superb talent. -gene.
Love
Tony
Fee
Regis
Love Always,
Sage
You made me look over my shoulder- in case you were watching.
So- where is this salvation thing?
I will be looking for it- maybe...it is deeper still.
John
Much peace, love and light,
Amber