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I Felt The Sun
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I Felt The Sun Beneath the canopy in the shade Grooming feathers where they laid Ducks would quack and wander around Hallows earth on solid ground Black birds foraged Through the blades of grass While the ducks rested in the shade As I listened to the birds in song I felt the sun upon my legs And gentle breeze caresses my hair I watched as the dragonflies Circled around the flax Riddles sounded by their quacks Glistening softly as it lapsed As I watched the river bend Bubbles rose from a distant land

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Reviews of "I Felt The Sun"

Reviewed by Victoria's Poetry & Voices of Muse

Reviewed on November 12, 2010

through your verse I too feel the warmth
of the sun...and love to listen to the birds in song

Grackles and Red Wings
Vickie

Reviewed by Paul Berube

Reviewed on November 11, 2010

Very well written, Darryn.

Reviewed by Lola Nation (Reader)

Reviewed on November 11, 2010

I liked the imagery. I think that there is a gap between the tenses for example "While the ducks rested in the shade
As I listen to the birds in song" -- I should think it would be listened. Either it should be in past or present tense...which it flips back and forth from, as a reader, I am sensing that you are in the moment here.

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