please reconsider (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by J Blue (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2004

touching.

Reviewed by Robert Blackwell (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2004

This is a heart-rending bit of outreach; I hope that your hand is accepted and perhaps another heart saved.

{{{{{{{{{{{{{{hugs}}}}}}}}}}}}}}}

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2004

We all need such a loving friend, may they take the hand you've extended.

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2004

Like Floria, I do hope your offer of help is accepted.
I made an offer like this to a den poet, some time ago,
and...unfortunately...it wasn't. A great talent has gone.
I will feel the hopelessness of it for some time to come.
Bless you, for caring about other human beings.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2004

This is so frightening Karla....
I do hope and pray that your offer
is accepted...whomever it is...
they would be wise to talk to you...
bless you..floria

Reviewed by na na (Reader)

Reviewed on March 30, 2004

Karla, if an understanding heart will help, you offer trememdous support and love. God bless you both. May your offer be accepted. Bill Murray

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on March 29, 2004

Karla I hope your offer is accepted, and I'll keep
you in prayer. A troubling situation and you are
so compassionate to offer help!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on March 29, 2004

This is scary Karla!!

Hope and pray your friend will listen....and who ever that maybe...listen to me.....if you take your own life there will be no cure.....God is the only way okay!!
Be strong and know you have true friends here who care deeply!!
I know it's not easy to listen to this...I have been where you are many times....But thank God for my friends here at AD.....they carried me through very bad times in my life......and I thank God for having them in my life!! Be strong now and talk to someone who care...at it seems like Karla are the right one to talk to!!

Take care Who ever you are!!

God Bless Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on March 29, 2004

(((Karla)))
Whoever this poem is for, they are blessed to have you for a friend...
God Bless
~Michelle~

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on March 29, 2004

you have a very compassionate and open heart to care for another in pain ...

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on March 29, 2004

Your wonderful heart and soul shine here again, Karla. Everyone should have a friend like you.

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on March 29, 2004

I am in high hopes that if this is reality rather than fiction, your friend will reconsider, don't be a coward, be strong, what ever the problem this too shall pass...good luck, Karla, hope your friend will come thru...Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on March 29, 2004

(((Karla)))

Heartbreaking, powerful response to someone's cry for help--I hope they reconsider. I've been there, so have you--thank God someone was there for us.

(((((((HUGS))))))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by Sue Hess

Reviewed on March 29, 2004

sometimes all that is needed is a friend who is willing to listen at the right time. if this is real, i hope it works out okay