climbing the mountain before me seemed impossible the journey begins with one step down here in the valley of despair surrounded by shadows of failure and frostbitten gnarled trees glacial ghosts of those that tried before
i had to find my way out of here and so i took one step then another despite the ice cold touch by twisted branch and clawed fingers determined to snatch my clothing and pitch me screaming back to the abyss of comfort i wanted no part of it
scrambling over treacherous terrain over jagged cravasse and glacial steep keeping my eyes ever upward focusing on the path ahead refusing to be deterred by crosscurrents of bitter wind and tattered winged ravens who wanted to see me fall
so they could pick at my shattered remains at the bottom of the ravine never to be heard from again after much trial and error exhausted by my arduous journey sometimes having to backtrack and think out my options
i did it i reached the summit staked my flag on the mountain peak knelt down and thanked God that i had made it achieved the impossible i was greeted by the northern lights dancing in my honor :-)
WOW Karla! This piece is amazing in its depth, power and meaning! I believe this to be one of your very best ever! Yes, you did it ... lifted us to a higher ground with this piece.
Youpiiii! Tu as réussi, Karla. C'est magnifique. I pray for you and for Karen every day since you asked me to. Thank you for this uplifting offering from your being. Looking forward to meeting you in this life or the next stage. Love and peace. Regis
Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Karla, you did make it to the top! That is important to you, and it is important to me that you strive to do so. There are so many cruel people in the world, who throw obstacles in your way. And Karla, we have to deal with them everyday. It seems life is one step forward and two back sometimes, but it is reallly two forward and one back if we keep sight of our goals. Beautiful poem. Your Friend Bill xoxo (((((hugs)))))
Karla,
This is excellent poetry...
Most inspiring with a powerful meaning!
Beautifully composed!
Hugs and love,
Sheila
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Karla...I love this powerful write...sometimes
the rougher the road the sweeter the gem at the end of
it....I took the trip with you....realized I had been
there before...reaching the top is sweet...great write..
((hugs)) floria
This entire poem is great, but that ending...WHEW! It literally took my breath away!! Terrific write, a visual masterpiece full of wisdom and grace! You ought to SERIOUSLY think of entering this in the next contest; you'd WIN!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D
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Love Tinka
~Joseph
A grand piece of work.
Love Ch'erie
This is a true Triumph!!
glowing golden pen Karla!Just Beautiful!
Kudo's
Reindeer
This is excellent poetry...
Most inspiring with a powerful meaning!
Beautifully composed!
Hugs and love,
Sheila
the rougher the road the sweeter the gem at the end of
it....I took the trip with you....realized I had been
there before...reaching the top is sweet...great write..
((hugs)) floria
Peace.
A powerful and inspiring write - "achieved the impossible" is a great and meaningful line...enjoyed thoroughly!
Robert
This entire poem is great, but that ending...WHEW! It literally took my breath away!! Terrific write, a visual masterpiece full of wisdom and grace! You ought to SERIOUSLY think of entering this in the next contest; you'd WIN!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D