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ain't no mountain high enough
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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climbing
the mountain before me
seemed impossible
the journey begins with one step 
down here in the valley of despair
surrounded by shadows of failure
and frostbitten gnarled trees
glacial ghosts of those that tried before

i had to find my way out of here
and so i took one step then another
despite the ice cold touch
by twisted branch and clawed fingers
determined to snatch my clothing
and pitch me screaming
back to the abyss of comfort
i wanted no part of it

scrambling over treacherous terrain
over jagged cravasse and glacial steep
keeping my eyes ever upward
focusing on the path ahead
refusing to be deterred by
crosscurrents of bitter wind
and tattered winged ravens
who wanted to see me fall

so they could pick at my
shattered remains at the
bottom of the ravine
never to be heard from again
after much trial and error
exhausted by my arduous journey
sometimes having to backtrack
and think out my options

i did it
i reached the summit
staked my flag on the mountain peak
knelt down and thanked God
that i had made it
achieved the impossible
i was greeted by the northern lights
dancing in my honor  :-)

(C) Copy written, 2004, by Karla Dorman. 


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 Reviews of "ain't no mountain high enough"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 3, 2004
This is magnificent Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*® (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2004
WOW Karla! This piece is amazing in its depth, power and meaning! I believe this to be one of your very best ever! Yes, you did it ... lifted us to a higher ground with this piece.

~Joseph

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on April 3, 2004
excellent poem from an very inspired poet ...

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2004
You have surpassed yourself in this one, Karla!
A grand piece of work.

Reviewed on April 3, 2004
WOW! This is just too great Karla. A beautiful and inspiring piece. < < < < < < < < < <HUGSS and LOVE>>>>>>>>Mikii

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot
Reviewed on April 3, 2004
Im still climbing, you'll get there. Ty for this inspirational write Karla.

Love Ch'erie

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on April 3, 2004
brava I felt the climb this is excellent sweetie....

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Youpiiii! Tu as réussi, Karla. C'est magnifique. I pray for you and for Karen every day since you asked me to. Thank you for this uplifting offering from your being. Looking forward to meeting you in this life or the next stage. Love and peace. Regis

Reviewed by na na (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Karla, you did make it to the top! That is important to you, and it is important to me that you strive to do so. There are so many cruel people in the world, who throw obstacles in your way. And Karla, we have to deal with them everyday. It seems life is one step forward and two back sometimes, but it is reallly two forward and one back if we keep sight of our goals. Beautiful poem. Your Friend Bill xoxo (((((hugs)))))

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Hip Hip Hooray! You made it! Well done, Karla.

Reviewed by Gaylen Sharp
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
I love it when you reach the summit!
This is a true Triumph!!

Reviewed by *********** ********** (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
very uplifting Karla.....well done!! ty, Dani

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Great job. Very creative.

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Another fantastic write from your ever
glowing golden pen Karla!Just Beautiful!
Kudo's

Reviewed on April 2, 2004
This was beautiful Karla, just lovely! I love your strength here,

Reindeer

Reviewed by andrea coltman
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Wonderful write..and with you I bet there really "ain't no mountain high enough!!!" Great reslove and fortitude...love Andrea

Reviewed by E. Richardson
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
mmm....well now...this is a new voice for you...very well done, Lady Buckeye.

Reviewed by Jim Dunlap
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Original and entrancing. Good job.

Reviewed by Sheila Jones (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Karla,
This is excellent poetry...
Most inspiring with a powerful meaning!

Beautifully composed!

Hugs and love,
Sheila

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Karla...I love this powerful write...sometimes
the rougher the road the sweeter the gem at the end of
it....I took the trip with you....realized I had been
there before...reaching the top is sweet...great write..
((hugs)) floria

Reviewed by A PAX
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
this is great! You are so so very talented!

Reviewed by Joyce Hale
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Wonderful write, Karla!!! So visual and descriptive, and as Karen said, the end is stunning! Bravo!!!

Peace.

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Great allagory here, most uplifting, jolly well done..

Reviewed on April 2, 2004
Karla,

A powerful and inspiring write - "achieved the impossible" is a great and meaningful line...enjoyed thoroughly!

Robert

Reviewed on April 2, 2004
(((Karla)))

This entire poem is great, but that ending...WHEW! It literally took my breath away!! Terrific write, a visual masterpiece full of wisdom and grace! You ought to SERIOUSLY think of entering this in the next contest; you'd WIN!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D


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