i hear taste see smell IT (rising from my body in nefarious waves-- demanding--defiant) i twist moan cry beg (beseeching the gods for just a hint of relief-- they do not deliver) no rest compress plaster pill (seems to alleviate IT--no thing seems to work-- i'm tortured on the rack) i yell scream shout shriek (with banshee moan 'ENOUGH'-- IT will not end--o, no-- until i breathe my last) IT consumes ravages devours exhausts (although i don't like IT-- IT is a part of me-- i learn to live with IT)
P.A.I.N.!
(C) Copy written, 2003/Revised, 2004, by Karla Dorman.
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Reviewed by Jane Rodway (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2004
God, this poem really grips the reader, we can feel the pain you are expressing, really well-done, thanks for sharing this personal peice.
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2004
Karla,
I can feel your P.A.I.N.! It is a relatively new kind of treatment and it’s called, IDD Therapy, or Internal Disc Decompression Therapy. I was involved in an auto accident two years ago, (Not my fault). I was on my way home, sitting at a stop sign when a automobile turned right in front of an on coming car, and WHAM! BOOM! BAM!… I think you get the message, but anyways I’ve gone through hell these last two years. (Haven’t we all)?
I am not sure what happened to you, but it is worth looking into. I went through 26 sessions, and now, I am getting ready to go through another 26. I didn’t find any type of relief until about the 11th treatment. I really do not want to go through any surgery, but will consider it as a last resort. Here I am rambling on, sorry. Great write, and if you need any information, please feel free to drop me a line.
Best of luck to you and yours,
Thomas
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on April 29, 2004
Enjoyed rereading this. You have a great skill when sharing emotions.
been there doing that(smile) pain that is... splendid write, good details to the tee.
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on April 28, 2004
I know Karla...believe me....I just planted...
well my husband did but I helped...six bushes and
two trees...and painted a picture and did so much
in the few days I was gone and now I am also in
pain...It seems we have to pay for anything we do
with having this fibromyalgia...I need a few days
here to try to recoup...have you tried a chiropractor?
One has helped me...I will pray for you....take care..
floria
once i had a toothache, and a friend offered to stamp on my foot to distract me from the agony of de teeth........
ok.......no jokes.........hope you feel better quickly.........
OUCH. This write made me HURT!! Sorry you are suffering; I pray that relief from your pain comes SOON! It is never fun to live with pain! You are in my prayers!
Very well written write about a not so pleasant subject that we know all too well!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your (sympathetic) twin, Karen Lynn. :(
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I can feel your P.A.I.N.! It is a relatively new kind of treatment and it’s called, IDD Therapy, or Internal Disc Decompression Therapy. I was involved in an auto accident two years ago, (Not my fault). I was on my way home, sitting at a stop sign when a automobile turned right in front of an on coming car, and WHAM! BOOM! BAM!… I think you get the message, but anyways I’ve gone through hell these last two years. (Haven’t we all)?
I am not sure what happened to you, but it is worth looking into. I went through 26 sessions, and now, I am getting ready to go through another 26. I didn’t find any type of relief until about the 11th treatment. I really do not want to go through any surgery, but will consider it as a last resort. Here I am rambling on, sorry. Great write, and if you need any information, please feel free to drop me a line.
Best of luck to you and yours,
Thomas
Love Tinka
Very powerful, and i can relate...
God Bless
Michelle
I ask St Jude to interceed too.
Keep on keeping on...
Reindeer
I wish you'd get relief ! You're always in my prayers!
well my husband did but I helped...six bushes and
two trees...and painted a picture and did so much
in the few days I was gone and now I am also in
pain...It seems we have to pay for anything we do
with having this fibromyalgia...I need a few days
here to try to recoup...have you tried a chiropractor?
One has helped me...I will pray for you....take care..
floria
ok.......no jokes.........hope you feel better quickly.........
pax....healing etc..........
hugs.......Anita
peace.....etc...
smiles???
PS: I Tried Tell You Start Drinking White Vinegar- It Cleans Up Blood & Kills Pain_
It Took 2 Years To Get My Vietnam Friend Running Kill PAIN In His Leg Bullets 3- He Stopped Pills Drinks White Vinegar,He Had Get Used To Taste_
I Have Little Or No Pain,i.e. Now Dentist Teeth Something Else,When I Go Take Knock Out Awake Pill!
TRASK
OUCH. This write made me HURT!! Sorry you are suffering; I pray that relief from your pain comes SOON! It is never fun to live with pain! You are in my prayers!
Very well written write about a not so pleasant subject that we know all too well!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your (sympathetic) twin, Karen Lynn. :(