the oasis (for deb's challenge) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on May 3, 2004

Fabulous challenge entry, Karla.

PS Any more room in the oasis, and any more cold ones?

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)

Reviewed on May 3, 2004

Blimey give you a challenge and whoosh, always a stunning reply.

I did the same with my TV. Very well done..

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on May 3, 2004

well done! your oasis is very viable ...

Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)

Reviewed on May 3, 2004

Thumbs up...BRILLIANT response to the challenge...unique perspectives...and great flow maintained all thoughout...

I am SPEECHLESS for the type of response I received on this...

Thanks for your support...
Yes, I am reading your poetry..
Debashish

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on May 2, 2004

this is great, keep it up...
God Bless
Michelle

Reviewed by Retta (Reindeer) Mckenzie

Reviewed on May 2, 2004

Beautiful Karla, a wonderful response to Deb's Challenge!

Reindeer

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on May 2, 2004

you are my favorite!!!!!!!!!

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on May 2, 2004

Nice job!

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on May 2, 2004

Brava Karla! This response if as good as it gets!
You my friend,have been writing top drawer!I'm happy for you!;-)
Also want to second turning off, the negative TV.
It will kill us all!

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on May 2, 2004

Karla,

Thanks for your wonderful review. This is a beautiful piece of poetry Karla. Glad to see you made thru the terrible storms.

I am reading your poetry,
Thomas

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on May 2, 2004

(((Karla)))

Wonderful response to Debs' challenge! You have met the challenge with a bang! Awesome job; brava!!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( *never forget!* >tears <

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on May 2, 2004

A really fine piece of writing here, Karla.
Looks like I'm one of the few who is dumb to
whatever the "challenge" is about. No matter...
your poem is very good.

Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)

Reviewed on May 2, 2004

karla this is wonderful...you surely did meet
this challenge and then some...I guess I didnt
read the rules too well...I didnt realize the
two lines were to be used..but it was fun anyway..
sorry I havent been around...just so busy in
summer...so much to do...this was great writing..
hugs to you..floria