Please pray for Karen and myself--we're
really having some difficulties as of
late. :-(
i slog on putting one foot in front of the other remaining ever hopeful i can avoid the traps of quicksand threatening to suck me under the ground
i fall into another one
i slog on battling the demons of depression that threaten to bury me with no hesitation no question they seek to destroy everything i am
i'm getting weary of the fight
i slog on hoping that the ground will level out soon so i can climb up the ravine i find myself in slimy vines crochet nets of trouble around my legs
and i've managed to lose the knife
i slog on hoping against hope i see the light soon advancing against all adversity thrown at me tell me this: they say that good things come to those who wait...
As everyone else has already said what I can tell you, Mz Karla, I will keep comments of strength of will to myself, suffice it to say, you made it this far, don't falter now...Rufuz sends his love and big licky kisses to help you go on...an excellent way to express your struggle, this poem...Peace in Strength, Ed & Rufuz
Reviewed by Bob Holt (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2004
I hope you both keep on slogging. Everyone here is really pulling for you.
The tide will turn; it ALWAYS does. We've all been there, dear. You just have to "avoid those traps" for a wee bit till the Son finds you.
Reviewed by Debashish Haar (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2004
Hang in there brave sisters, let the light shine on you...and take you to the sky...I am really sorry about the news, Karla...Both of you are in my prayers...
Debashish
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on May 8, 2004
Keep on keeping on. Soon the night is going to be day.
Great fortitude...
I share the pain of difficulty with you. You are always in my prayers. Most striking part of this poem, apart from all other things, is the bravery and courage you availed for yourself to generate words that form verses of highest quality.
I'm torn about what to say first... i am so very sorry both of you are going through difficulties, and i WILL pray for you right now. secondly... this poem is very powerful work. please know that when i (and i am certain many, many others) read something like this, i am encouraged in my own poetic pursuits, in my faith and in my own small attempts to encourage otherse around me every day. so, KEEP WRITING through it! Dawn
Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2004
LOTS AND LOTSA OF prayers hang in there ...
And this is a very well written poem.
Lady Buckeye, you and and Lady Redbird are always in my prayers...God bless both of you.
Reviewed by * ashura (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2004
You know, Karla, Im still the new kid on the block around here. Probably will be for the next 10 years too. So I don't know what is going on for you. Whether this is indogenous depression or that youre feeling depressed because of circumstances beyond your control. If it's the former then you need to get the right medication to help alleviate the symptoms. If it's the latter then I can only try to empathise and add to the positive energy that obviously goes out of here to you, and Karen. I apologise for my ignorance of your situation. So many times I have seen those who have the least to give, give the most. And those who are in pain offer to help with the pain of others. You put a lot into this little community, and we all love you for the golden-heart you are.
this poem has alot of weight........
things will get better.........
your in my prayers.........pax A
Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2004
I know your tired of waiting
I always hopethe best for you and karen.
I'll be praying for you two.
Your friend..............Ron
Reviewed by Floria Kelderhouse (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2004
Karla stay strong..He is there for you...
believe and it will happen...you are constantly
in my prayers...I know what depression is like..
and Karen is also in my prayers....keep the faith..
floria
Powerful, heart touching piece, Karla, it is penned so beautifully!
Karla, and Karen, your angel sits upon your shoulder, and I pray that you both will soon find inner peace. Do keep your faith...Holding you close in thought and prayer.
Hugs and love,
Sheila
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2004
This is a well thought out write, and plea for help, although You may feel overwhelmed at times remember You and Your brilliant sister will find the “Yellow Brick Road!” My thoughts and prayers go out to the both of You wonderful ladies! Just keep slogging through the quagmire, and there really are better days ahead! “Never Surrender!!!!!” The Lord works in mysterious ways. Keep the faith!!!!!
will hold you in my thoughts and hope that you soon leave the ravine and that all you see is bright sunshine to bring you much joy and happiness..
Tommy
Karla, your writing keeps getting better and better and very expressive! I'm praying that things will turn for the better and light your life with sunshine, love and prosperity. Keep writing!
Even though I am having "issues" myself, I shall pray for you! You deserve a break (so do I, actually!), but you need it a heck of a lot more than me! heartbreaking, heartshattering poem that cries of the pain you are having! God, PLEASE hear us; we NEED Your Help!!!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <
Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)
Reviewed on May 7, 2004
I wish I could send you a package of Prozac,
along with prayers, but alas! You must be the
one to get that prescription...for both of you
...and soon, I hope. I am saddened when people
suffer like this, and get denied help.
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Debashish
Great fortitude...
And this is a very well written poem.
Keep that pen busy, and your faith too!;-)Love, Eileen
You know my prayers are with you and Karen both...
God Bless
And May His Blessings Shower upon you
Michelle~
Be well, lovely Karla. We all wish it for you.
Michael
things will get better.........
your in my prayers.........pax A
I always hopethe best for you and karen.
I'll be praying for you two.
Your friend..............Ron
believe and it will happen...you are constantly
in my prayers...I know what depression is like..
and Karen is also in my prayers....keep the faith..
floria
Love Tinka
Karla, and Karen, your angel sits upon your shoulder, and I pray that you both will soon find inner peace. Do keep your faith...Holding you close in thought and prayer.
Hugs and love,
Sheila
Best wishes,
Thomas Lanechanger
Tommy
Even though I am having "issues" myself, I shall pray for you! You deserve a break (so do I, actually!), but you need it a heck of a lot more than me! heartbreaking, heartshattering poem that cries of the pain you are having! God, PLEASE hear us; we NEED Your Help!!!!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <
along with prayers, but alas! You must be the
one to get that prescription...for both of you
...and soon, I hope. I am saddened when people
suffer like this, and get denied help.
If it's any consolation, this is a tremendous poem; and we will all be cheering for, and praying for, both you and Karen, as you valiantly 'slog on.'