Life Lessons, Taught by Pain (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 19, 2004

Easier to quit but being a fighter is harder but well worth the gain at the end of the fight, stay the course there.
Nice write
Tommy

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on July 19, 2004

Well penned Karla!!

So many lessons we have to learn...sometimes little to gain!!

But we just keep on going forward!!

Positive write my friend!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2004

Fantastic poetry, Karla!!!� Keep the gloves off and keep forging ahead Poet!!!

Reviewed by Franz Kessler

Reviewed on July 19, 2004

Courageous and truthful write. Franz

Reviewed by Amira van Kerk (Reader)

Reviewed on July 19, 2004

Wise words.
Stay strong
All the best

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on July 18, 2004

Excellent write.

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on July 18, 2004

Great write, I am glad you are a fighter
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Ronald Hull

Reviewed on July 18, 2004

Your ordeal is now my pain, too. I will help share the load. Couldn't help thinking of that old tune, "If I were a carpenter, and you were a lady, ...

Reviewed by Peter Paton

Reviewed on July 18, 2004

Karla..Christ has given thee sufficient grace to bear the burdens and pains of life...you will survive *K* by God's Mercy...and continue to lead a full , happy and productive life .

God Bless

Peter Paton

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on July 18, 2004

Karla, (HUGS),
This poem reminds me of one I wrote today. It is
called "Stepping Stool". It leads to the readers imagination of what to wonder would happen between Christ and the symbol of the stepping stool, but I thought it turned out pretty neat myself! It reminds me of your fierce spirit to survive like mine! Take care, good buddy!
Love,
Becca

Reviewed by Sarah Tagert

Reviewed on July 18, 2004

wow, this write is filled w, so much wisdom!

Reviewed by Lori Moore

Reviewed on July 18, 2004

A doctor writing their own scripts is almost as bad as lawyers representing themselves. I�m glad you�re not a quitter. I�m always inspired by your work Enjoyed.

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on July 18, 2004

(((Karla)))

I love the lessons in courage and perserverance in this poem; even though you may hurt, you refuse to give in to your pain, and you go on to the best of your ability! Your courage is nothing short of inspiring! Keep on hoping and dreaming, and know that one day you WILL be without pain, without fear, without doubt, and without worry!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on July 18, 2004

With each poem, you do grow,
yes indeed, I have seen this, that is how I know,
your pain is non existent,
if you are to scream and shout,
exit it does by the vent,
or not or just about...

Peace dear friend Karla, Ed & Rufuz