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I Can't Remember!
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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Inspired by Southern Horizon's "Before" poem. Thank you for remembering. :(


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What was it like before that day?
Try as I might, I can't remember!
Flashes of memory fade away,
Buried by that day in September.

It seems we have always lived like this,
Through alerts and threats of terror strikes.
Now all I can do is reminisce,
And try to tell you what it was like.

It isn't like I am old and gray!
I just want things back the way they were!
Is that too much to ask for these days?
Before all of this horror incurred?

Before airplanes flew into buildings,
Ripping things as we knew them apart,
Could we have prevented the killings?
Before hatred went clear off the charts?

Innocence collapsed with the Towers,
Trust billowed up in the smoke and the flames.
We're expected to fear and cower
And look for the one(s) who are to blame.

What was it like before that day?
Try as I might, I can't remember!
Flashes of memory fade away,
Buried by that day in September.

(C) Copy written, August 13, 2004, by Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "I Can't Remember!"
Reviewed on August 16, 2004
(((Karla))))
Excellent write
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on August 15, 2004
Karla...powerful write...Fletcher B

Reviewed by Lady Peg (Reader)
Reviewed on August 14, 2004
This is so powerful and well done Karla!

Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on August 14, 2004
What can I say about this? It says it all about that. Love you lots and send you the peace of my soul. Regis xoxoxo

Reviewed by Tracey Hardie
Reviewed on August 14, 2004
Excellent write!!!!! Well done!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on August 14, 2004
Powerful Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
Karla,

Very powerful write! I don't think anyone can forget that devastating and horrific day! Thanks for sharing this!

Cynthia

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
Excellent write!

Reviewed by Sherry Gibson
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
Karla,

Yes, it is hard to remember life before 9-11. It is etched so permanently in my mind as well. I hope that as history progresses, this day is never forgotten. I also hope that history will remember how America woke up and that day and grouped together to become one mighty nation working 'together' once again.

Sherry

Reviewed by Melissa Rives
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
You said it so well...great writing as always...from your heart!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
Superb Karla! You have the right concept just as Lisa
does! We know that they are ready to strike when we
least expect it in a place we may never think of. There
is a Jihad called, and that means all out war on their part
but in ways we aren't used to. They are hit-run-and hide
terrorists, and finding them is very difficult, since we are
an open society and don't know how to play by their bloody rules.
But we're learning, if only the foolish naysayers would understand
what's at stake, and stop fighting amongst ourselves!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
Karla, We can't let ourselves forget, yes, yes we have to go forward, but the very second those sadistic and horrific madmen think we have forgotten, it will happen all over again. They are laying in wait, for the American people to wipe that day from our minds, so they can bring it back to us ten fold. I'm not scared, and I won't run, but I refuse to bury it. It's not that I can't, it's that I won't.
You are not alone. To sit and look into a sunrise, without one thought of that day, is completely impossible. It changed the whole outlook on life.
This is an awesome write Karla...Thank You.

Lisa

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
It has happened America must move on, and not turn it in to some kind of vacation day.

Here we had them for hundreds of years. The IRA, american supported did far worse...Plus fight two world wars 80% alone.

America must learn to grow up, we know it's only a few hundred yrs old, but achieves nowt, bar fear, if you let it..

It happened, but thank the brits for stopping neuclear subs and the american navy being blown up.. yet we only got 11 out of 16, because the loud mouth ny times bragged about our agent...Blair is angery with loud mouth news paper i saw it first yanks..Your media will help finish america, as they can't keep quiet, and the yanks are way to gun ho.

America grow up

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
Very nice. You had a wonderful inspiration. I enjoyed each stanza, especially the last.

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
Superb, Karla. I don't know of anyone that I deal with on a regular basis who hasn't at one time framed what they were about to say in terms of "before 9/11" or "the World Trade Center tragedy....something something." More so since I live outside NYC. A touching memorial in verse.

Reviewed by Sue Hess
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
things will certainly never be the same

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
It's Those Horrors You Never Want Hear About If Told By Our Conspired USA Politicians You Would Never Want to Remamber!

TRASK

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
Excellent work, and we should never forget or we’ll get hit even worse than the last time! Thanks for sharing and remembering that unforgettable day!

Reviewed by Marilyn Seray
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
excellent poetry.
everyone was going on about their business (I guess)

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
Karla..You are right....We must never ever forget this horror and outrage
Love
Peter

Reviewed by ~Indigo~ Elga
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
Dear Karla,

A very emotive write, loss of life is never nice. Well written.

warm hugs
Elga

Reviewed on August 13, 2004
(((Karla)))

We should NEVER forget; thank you for this reminder of a horrific day that will live on in our minds (and hearts) forever! Strong, emotive write that still carries pain and heartbreak even nearly three years later! Very well done; BRAVA!

God bless America again!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
Powerful piece, Karla, as was the one by Lisa that inspired this.

Reviewed by Michelle Mills
Reviewed on August 13, 2004
Like the Holocaust...we should NEVER forget. Beautiful write Karla! Michelle


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