Your True Patriotism shows forth
here in this poem Karla! Exceptional
Write!
Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2004
Karla, your incredible ability to create these timeless writes is a shining testament shown through your gifted golden quill my friend. An outstanding well-penned patriotic composition. Good luck at your reading on Saturday. Thank you for sharing it. Take care and be well.
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2004
Awe Karla well said..
Here we have had to live with terrorists 800 yrs before my birth, The IRA had no discrimination who they killed, it is just a way of life for us..
Glad to see The Brit spirit is alive and kicking in America..lol
We can hear you Karla and are there with you in spirit. It amazes me that terrorists can also be self righteous as they slaughter the innocent. Peace and blessings. Mikii
Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)
Reviewed on September 9, 2004
Great poem, Karla. Love the title too! And congratulations on the poem reading Saturday! It'll be a wonderful experience I'm sure...
Karla, great message in this one. You tell im Girl!...bloody cowards think killing kids will get them more support for their cause...
HOW WRONG THEY ARE!
Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 8, 2004
thank you!
sueb
Reviewed by P. Michaels (Reader)
Reviewed on September 8, 2004
Karla, hope all goes well at the library. This one is potent. Wish I could be there to hear you read it.
Bless you, Karla... you have articulated such truth in your powerful refrain: liberty and justice and freedom can NEVER fall because they are founded on the precepts of love, and, eventually, that will overcome all obstacles in its path. And no "enemy" can take away the freedom we possess on the inside; nothing and no-one can chain the inner man that has spiritual foundations - as your spirited outpouring so demonstrates! I tend to go by days rather than dates... yesterday, being Tuesday, was the day for me and it was most peculiar that I was awakened at 4.15am to a grey, sunless daybreak and a howling wind (the previous two days being brilliant sunshine!) which focussed my thoughts and helped me to pray. It is said that "When we are weak, then are we strong" and your write demonstrates just such a truth, understanding as I do that you suffer immeasurably with physical pain. May you truly be healed and comforted - in body, mind and spirit. In the meantime, you know the pain and anguish that others will be going through when "love hurts". May there be great solidarity at your library on Saturday. Love and constant prayers. Kate xx
Three Cheers deserved here. You can claim to be patriotic. And even claim what you do is right. But you can never be an American. Till in the name of freedom you fight.
Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)
Reviewed on September 8, 2004
Great patriotic write, Karla.
Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)
Reviewed on September 8, 2004
Fantastic write and show of the American strength.
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here in this poem Karla! Exceptional
Write!
Here we have had to live with terrorists 800 yrs before my birth, The IRA had no discrimination who they killed, it is just a way of life for us..
Glad to see The Brit spirit is alive and kicking in America..lol
Brillant, my friend - quite simply brillant!
Robert
love&light,
**Mari**
Reindeer
but there is alot of us too
excellent feelings and sentiments
lots of power shown here
*luv ya
Excellent as always
God Bless
Michelle~
HOW WRONG THEY ARE!
sueb
Karla, hope all goes well at the library. This one is potent. Wish I could be there to hear you read it.
Love,
Patty
TRASK
Peter
Well penned, sure to be a hit!Kudo's!
Way to go dear friend, penned in true spirit and style.
Warm hugs and love
Elga
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <
God bless America again!