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The Great Giveaway
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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I can't help but feel a little jealous...pray for me? :(

I hope you feel good about yourself
Giving people cars
Fulfilling their wildest wishes
Because you can

Meanwhile people are going without food
Or their daily meds
If they find work, can they survive
On what they earn

Meanwhile people are dying on the streets
They have no health care
What about their dreams and hopes
Does it matter

I could use some wild dreams
A better job/car
But wishes don't come true for me
Neither do my prayers

(C) Copy written, 14 Sept., 2004, by Karla Dorman.


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Reviewed on September 16, 2004
Dear Karla, don't give upon the powwer of prayer. It does heal not always as quickly as we'd like, and about healthcare. Whew! I shall continue to pray for you and all with whom my life intersects even when only on the net and their messages. Dear Karla hug yourself for me. Your friend in Arkansas Mikii.

Reviewed on September 15, 2004
(((Karla)))

I know how you feel because I feel the same way. Whatever happened to helping those who are REALLY in need? Such a sad write; I pray things get better for the both of us; I hate seeing you so unhappy! If I could help you in any way, I would, believe you me! I will pray extra hard for you; this has got to end! This can't go on forever!

(((HUGS))) (And prayers) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >Tearsr <

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2004
prayers and hugs to you! I understand. Next month will be the first time in two years that I've had health insurance - on disability. I'm standing with you in asking that your needs be met. love you!

sueb

Reviewed on September 15, 2004
Very true and sad Karla, but rich people don't seem any happier with all their money,

Reindeer

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on September 15, 2004
As Lori said, Oprah didn't actully give the cars away - the manufacturer did; and I just read that this will now be the wave of the future - to entice more of us - to buy many more new products. Maybe you can cash in yet, Karla. Think positive; and watch for new giveaways at a TV station, or shopping mall, near you soon.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang
Reviewed on September 15, 2004
Karla,
All prayers get answered, just maybe not in this lifetime you are living now. I shall pray for you, as I always do. I was selfish and had taken pity on myself when I was diagnosed with my Second brain tumor. Not any more. God shall take care of me and I am in his hands. It is his will. I have no control over it. Be HAPPY you have a job and a roof over your head. I know I am. I am on Disability but am still appreciative. Life is good and with prayer, I shall get thru this too. I know you can too. Just listen quietly, and you shall Hear his voice.
Love,
Becca

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 15, 2004
I admire your honesty and for making yourself so vulnerable with this heart-wrenching write, Karla. All of us have days like this - and some "DESERVE" to have them more than those of us who are relatively well-off, too! That's as in the world's way of things, at least. But life is fundamentally about what makes us secure (rich, content and peaceful) on the inside... which remains rock-steady irrespective of the external circumstances, come what may. When the going gets tough, we sure can be tested as to where our "heart" lies, but yours is stout and true, Karla, and I know that you do have both deep trust and faith in a God who is well-able to supply ALL of your needs. And I have seen a deep disappointment in your last line, which I have read as "unanswered" (as yet!!) prayer for REAL needs - like health and sufficient resources - and not for the gawdy trappings of "success". Very poignant. Turning towards God and not away from Him will ALWAYS yield a bountiful harvest in His (frustrating!!!) time! Standing with you, Karla, and may you feel some actual relief SOON... LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on September 14, 2004
prayers for material gain are always left unanswered ... prayers for enlightenment will always be heard ...

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen
Reviewed on September 14, 2004
Oh Karla, this one tugs at the heart. So powerfully penetrating in its sublime simplicity. You heart is made of solid gold--if you will excuse the crude comparison! I love it! Masterful, dear Poet!

Reviewed by Al Swanson (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2004
Karla I liked this, but then too, to decipher a dream is very charismatic, as you have stated, the finer things are of much more importance, I always thought Opra was an air head anyways, ty al

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 14, 2004
Karla I know what you're feeling is only the honest feelkings we all have sometimes when we see people with money able to do anything they want. It reminds me of the sripture that tells us not to keep our minds on the things of this world that are only temporary, but on the things of heaven that last forever. It always helps me when I remember that. Although it isn't easy when you see the worlds
ways. ;-)Take care dear Karla,I know tomorrow you'll be back to your sensible loving compassionate self!;-)

Reviewed by Fletcher Bailey (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2004
Karla, there is nothing wrong with wishing. Sooner or later your message will get through. I know what you mean in your poem, it is always the undeserving that get the adcvantages.

Reviewed on September 14, 2004
(((Karen))
This is excellent as always
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on September 14, 2004
Karla, glad to read this until your last two lines -- don't do that to yourself. I believe God does answer prayer, just not always on our timeline or in the way that we might explect. Having been without health ins for 7 years and nearly a month w/o my meds I share your sentiment. It irks me most to see my own family members or those I have considered friends throwing around wads of money, knowing I cannot qualify for any assistance and could really use those little pink pills... that said, I love Oprah and she does a lot of good in this world. Back to your write, wishes WILL come true for you. Prayers will be answered for you and for me. God will provide enough strength for the day - that even your writes have taught me!! Dawn

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 14, 2004
I hear ya, hon, you know my email address, sounds like you need to talk, just send me an email and I WILL answer ya...Keep smiling the best you can, what else can you do? Peace, Ed & Rufuz

Reviewed on September 14, 2004
It is a shame that money floats around,out of the grasp of those who need it.

Reviewed by Lori Moore
Reviewed on September 14, 2004
Sad write. A side note... Oprah did not actually give the cars away. Yes, she facilitated the giveaway but the cars were donated to the show by the manufacturer, who also paid all taxes and any customizing that may need be done. The cost of each car was almost $30,000. Another act of wicked cooperate America. Personally, I think Oprah is pretty cool. Great write.

Reviewed on September 14, 2004
Some of us only can with our last cent to help others. I am one of them. I'm not rich, but I will give help even if it's my last cent. I always put others in front of myself. It's the thing that can make me happy.

Sandie May Angel


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