Save A Life (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on October 29, 2004

SUCH POWER AND WISDOM that it packs a very special punch, Karla! You are really very good at this!!!!!! Many will hear your resounding words of truth and warning, but perhaps will not have the courage to follow through... however, the more your words are RECEIVED, the more lives will be changed for the good... Thank you for your "cut to the chase" message and for your concern for those who suffer. Bless you. LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by M.Bennett Hooper (Mikii)

Reviewed on October 29, 2004

Karla, Karla, you always pack a wallop gyrlfren. Power thy name is Karla. <HUGS> your friend Mikii

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on October 29, 2004

Great Message!!!! and photo totally brings the reality of,-- this could be you.
Excellent!!!!
God Bless You.
Tracey

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

Words to heed

Reviewed by Cynthia Castle (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

Karla,

Well said! Brilliant Haiku! Powerful advice and so true! Love the graphic also!

Cynthia

Reviewed by Anna Marie Fritz (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

Stunning graphic and message!

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

Great message!

Reviewed by Dale Clark

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

Very powerful and sage advice.

Reviewed by La Belle Rouge (Reader)

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

Powerful write, Karla, wise advice.

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

Powerful message Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

A most powerful message and 'Ku, Karla.

Reviewed by Rebekah Rosie Lang

Reviewed on October 28, 2004

Spread the Word, Yes!
We all need to try and Stop the violence!
Excellent Haiku Karla!
Love ya!
Becca

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

before you lying in the chalk ... much needed message ...

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

Karla this is excellent
God Bless
Michelle~

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

MOST EXCELLENTLY DONE DAMNED GOOD DEAR KARLA_

YOU ROCK IN EYE'S Of (God)!!

Your Friend,TRASK

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

Superb Ku Karla! This is outstanding in its short dynamic effect!
a one two punch no pun intended;-)

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

"It's all up to you!" How true!!!

Reviewed by A Serviceable Villain

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

Karla,

This starts off with a fine image that builds into a powerfully delivered, succinct message - brillant my friend!!

Robert

Reviewed by SHERRY HEIM

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

An excellent and powerful message, Karla. The ability to change our lives must come from our own strength and realization of self worth.
Take care,
Sherry

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

What women have to understand the moment they say no more and get away from the man who is not going to change they take control of their lives back. Keep the message going.

Reviewed by Karen Chalfant (Reader)

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

Good message, Karla. People in such situations often wait too long. They need a lot of encouragement and support. Great work!

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

wonderful use of haiku form, excellent message of empowerment to those entrapped in such situations

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

(((Karla)))

Good advice! Thanks; you may have saved some lives today! Well done; brava! Powerful write in so few words; small, yes, but packs a giant-sized wallop!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on October 27, 2004

absolutely right!!!