Liquid Sunshine :-) (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed on July 15, 2008

I love this! I will find puddles in Missouri on my trip next week and jump in one for the two of us. No puddles in California--drought, drought, drought. Thank heaven for little girls! and puddles! And rain! Eileen

Reviewed by Tracey L. O' Very (Reader)

Reviewed on February 7, 2005

Sweet Fun Poem! Never act your age. always be a little girl. This poem is so sweet and just brings smiles The picture is adorable!
Thank You Have fun Always play in the puddles!
and drink lossa liquid sunshine -- Orange Juice -- for no colds.
Love Tracey xoox
Salute!

Reviewed by A PAX

Reviewed on February 7, 2005

awwwwwwwwwwwwwww

i am keeping this one :)

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on February 7, 2005

I love the poem and pictures
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on February 7, 2005

Lovely poem Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on February 7, 2005

But who cares. Get out of the way.
It's about time I have some fun.

Yes it is!!!

Reviewed by Phillip William Allen

Reviewed on February 7, 2005

A great perspective you've penned

Reviewed by William Bonilla

Reviewed on February 6, 2005

LOVELY POETRY kARLA
ENJOYED MUCH

wILLIAM ....pEACE

Reviewed by Ch'erie de Perrot

Reviewed on February 6, 2005

Funny thing that, the first thing that went through my mind was same as ED, ( Beer) but then I knew that it would be something else coming from you :):) and I was not disappointed.
THE BIGGEST and the DEEPEST S.P.L.A.S.H neat fun Thanks Karla.

Hugs Ch'erie

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on February 6, 2005

Karla, a delightful uplifting poem....great write

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on February 6, 2005

we must never forget what it's like to look through the eyes of a child ... helps to keep things in perspective ...

delightful poetry!

Reviewed by Dave Harm

Reviewed on February 6, 2005

I seen the title and was thinking like Ed. But, as always I wasn't disappointed. Every now and then, its great to forget how old (or young) we are. Just do it...

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on February 6, 2005

I remember liquid sunshine, although I seem to remember it being some kind of hallucinagenic(sp?) drug...still this is a cute poem from a cute yong lady...Ed

Reviewed by George Carroll

Reviewed on February 6, 2005

Haven't done that in years but it sounds like fun at any age. Excellent poem

Reviewed by Evelyn Simon

Reviewed on February 6, 2005

Beautifully written. Simply beautiful

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on February 6, 2005

(((Karla)))

This is absolutely one of the most precious poems I have ever had the pleasure of reading! Exceptional in its imagery and word usage; outstanding! BRAVA!! You just keep on getting better and better with eacn new write; how do you do it???

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :D

Reviewed by Judy Lloyd (Reader)

Reviewed on February 6, 2005

That is so cute and it reminds me of me when I was that age and going out to step in mud puddles.