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Empathy
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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i wanna feel your pain -
taste it & smell it & compare it to my own,
rubbin it all over my body until none
of us hurts any more.
i know you're tired of takin pills that don't work
nohow & givin the doctors money you don't have
so you can feel better,
when the only ones feelin better are those with
fat wallets stuffed with thousand dollar bills & look -
here we are, still hurtin,
feelin just as bad as we did yesterday &
prayin for one solitary moment of peace ...
come on, give me your pain,
'cause i know exactly what you are goin through ...
i got a bottle of empathy we can drink
& drown our sorrows with.

(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.
 
 


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 Reviews of "Empathy"
Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on June 24, 2005
Oh I need a sip too....geez I always said if only you get something like that in a bottle it would be great!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Susan Barton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 24, 2005
so good!!

Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on June 24, 2005
"i got a bottle of empathy we can drink"

Fabulous line!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on June 24, 2005
Karla,
There are thousands if not millions out there that may take you up on this! Me being one of them.
Pass the picture please!
Great write!

Lisa

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on June 24, 2005
Superbly powerful write Karla and empathic to the core

Paul;-}

Reviewed by Rebecca Burns (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2005
That was great, the picture went well witht he poem
Your friend, Rebecca

Reviewed on June 23, 2005
Well-expressed emotions. Drink or drown, doesn't make a different. Sadness and despair is felt through empathy.

Wonderful expression, Karla! Your poetry has improved so much lately. It is a joy to read you.

Sandie Angel a.k.a. Sandie May Angel :o)

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2005
Sitting in the alcove of the Cafe Misery, I presume.

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on June 23, 2005
Another powerful piece and the offer to drink our problems away is temmpting except that's almost as costly as the pills. I take 12 pills a day so I can certainly emphazize with this on Karla.
Hugs,
Felix

Reviewed on June 23, 2005
(((Karla)))

Powerful piece of writing; says much! Very well done! BRAVA!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :(

You are always in my thoughts and prayers!

Reviewed by Sandra Mushi
Reviewed on June 23, 2005
Just don't give up, Karla.

God bless,

Sandie.

Reviewed on June 23, 2005
Wow! This is an extremly powerful piece
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on June 23, 2005
I'll have a full picture please!!!!!

Reviewed by George Carroll
Reviewed on June 23, 2005
Eileen hit it on the barrel head.

Reviewed by Cynth'ya Reed
Reviewed on June 23, 2005
Girl you are mad as a woman who just used up her the last of her ice cream on an eating binge (did I tell too much about myself with that last statement)? (LOL). I LOVE THIS! (and you too my Sistah writer)

blessin's and ((((hugs)))
cynth'ya

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on June 23, 2005
Superb altruistic poem Karla! We all have our bad days
nice if we can share them sometimes.

Blessings,
Eileen


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