Senryu Chain (5/7/5): Last Laugh (poem) by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner on AuthorsDen

Reviewed by Huda Orfali

Reviewed on August 9, 2005

I'll soar to the Lights
that give me inspiration
or will die trying:

That sums it all, Karla
well done

Reviewed by Joseph* OneLight*� (Reader)

Reviewed on August 9, 2005

Fly Karla, fly!

This IS an inspirational write.

Love & Light,
Joseph

Reviewed by Karen Lynn Vidra, The Texas Tornado

Reviewed on August 9, 2005

let those northern lights shine on, master poetess! brava!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Ed Matlack

Reviewed on August 9, 2005

Flap those wings girl...ed

Reviewed by C. McGovern-Bowen

Reviewed on August 9, 2005

precious gift, that freedom to fly!
well done, Karla.
peace,
Carolyn

Reviewed by Sandie May Joyce (Sandie Angel)

Reviewed on August 9, 2005

When you dare to try,
You are daring to succeed.

Good write, Karla!

Sandie May Angel a.k.a. Sandie Angel :o)

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes

Reviewed on August 9, 2005

Oh I crashed so many times I have a flat nose from that...but who cares...write right on girl...I believe my nose will lead me to better things.......someday.....lol!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Alexandra* OneLight*� Authors & Creations

Reviewed on August 9, 2005

Yes, dear friend... fly on! If we give poetry (creation) wings, it will not only constantly return to us in wider inspiration, but it will also take us along in its unbound flight. Like dream, like love... like joy! :0)
Love&Light&Poetry Unbound*
Alexandra*

Reviewed by jude forese

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

poetry is certainly an art of flight ... never stop taking chances ...

Reviewed by Carole Mathys

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

Outstanding Karla, you go girl!

peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

make your mark, spread your wings, soar :)

Reviewed by Kerry Compton Star Girl

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

Go Karla go! Show 'em what you are made of. Gutsy...I like it.

Reviewed by Felix Perry

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

A great reflection on you and your conviction to writing. Writing is a way of life and those that say it is only a hobby are only kidding themselves. Thank you for sharing your latest offering with us.

Felix

Reviewed by E T Waldron

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

Excellent Karla, why shouldn't you have the last laugh it's your stuff!;-) nice work!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Michelle Kidwell Power In The Pen

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

This is wonderful
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

Ah, good struff, and you are most definitely leaving your mark on the world. Yes.

Reviewed by Leah Wilson

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

Standing ovation! Fantastic!

Reviewed by Kate Burnside

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

Reminds me of Those Magnificent Men In Their Flying Machines, Karla! Do you know the statistics of all the world's Greats who invented all the things we now take for granted... the thousands and thousands of aborted attempts before: BINGO!! Success!!???? So just you go right ahead - you hit gold EVERY time anyway, so you DEFINITELY have nothing to lose... the only way is up for you! :)) Is it a bird...? Is it a plane...? NO! It's SuperKarla!!! Neeeoooowwwwww! LOL Kate xx

Reviewed by Kate Clifford (Reader)

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

Love the way you think!

Reviewed by Mr. Ed

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

How will I know what
will happen unless I try?

So very, very true, Karla!

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK

Reviewed on August 8, 2005

Excellent_

Karla If You Never Smile You As I Will Have The Last Laugh-Think About It!

TRASK