With joy in my heart, I accept Abdi-noor Mohamed, my brother's, challenge. I pray it comes true .
To span the oceans of division and hate that have eroded all common sense will take a miracle to accomplish. To fix the broken shores of both of our lands, lost to apathy and the rage of war, will take a miracle to accomplish. To find sanity when ripcurrents and tides threaten to pull us off unsteady feet will take a miracle to accomplish. That's where you come in. Your voice, the cornerstone of the bridge that leads o'er troubled waters straight to the promised land, is the miracle I've been praying for. My heart, my hands, the girders that support and reach out in faith, spanning great distances, is the miracle you've been hoping for. Brother, join me on the central span and let's dance and celebrate: we have accomplished the miracle we've sought ... peace! Harmony!
(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.
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Reviews of "Bridge Over Troubled Waters (Abdi-noor's Challenge)"
Excellent. Excellent. I am proud of you to be my sister, dear karla. You have expressed brotherhood in the most affectionate and emotional way. Politics and religion are the main source of trouble which make the water too murky. But let's put a bridge in place to close the gap .... a bridge with strong foundatins that are built upon the concretes of truth, peace and love.
Your brother abdi-noor
Good thoughts, though I doubt we will ever see peace in our day...Ed
Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2005
The same God made us all.
This kinda poem lifts the spirit. And makes one realise there really is hope.
Bloody marvellous....
Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2005
Karla, You write these beautiful uniting works of art and so when you write there is such a powerful purpose that drives you and that ought always be honored! I love this and I applaud your work here!
Peace',
Rich Criso Suarez
Again, I have yet to read this challenge, but, judging by the overwhelming responses, it is one that certainly stirs to action and inspires the pen with a true sense of brotherhood and purpose. Beautiful write, Karla, and I love the form that flows like a river of hope. Bless you, Kate xx
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God Bless
Michelle!
peace and love, Carole
Your brother abdi-noor
This kinda poem lifts the spirit. And makes one realise there really is hope.
Bloody marvellous....
Peace',
Rich Criso Suarez
Felix
Love Tinka
Eileen
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D