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Bridge Over Troubled Waters (Abdi-noor's Challenge)
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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With joy in my heart, I accept Abdi-noor Mohamed, my brother's, challenge. I pray it comes true .


Poem Artwork

To span the oceans
of division and hate
that have eroded
all common sense will
take a miracle
to accomplish.
To fix the broken
shores of both of our lands,
lost to apathy
and the rage of war,
will take a miracle
to accomplish.
To find sanity
when ripcurrents and
tides threaten to pull
us off unsteady feet
will take a miracle
to accomplish.
That's where you come in.
Your voice, the cornerstone
of the bridge that leads
o'er troubled waters
straight to the promised land,
is the miracle I've
been praying for.
My heart, my hands, the
girders that support
and reach out in faith,
spanning great distances,
is the miracle you've
been hoping for.
Brother, join me on
the central span and
let's dance and celebrate:
we have accomplished
the miracle we've sought ...
peace!  Harmony!

(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.


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 Reviews of "Bridge Over Troubled Waters (Abdi-noor's Challenge)"
Reviewed on September 16, 2005
Beautiful Karla absolutely beautiful
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on September 16, 2005
Beautifully said Karla...

peace and love, Carole

Reviewed by Roger Ochs
Reviewed on September 15, 2005
You've met the challenge with grace and style.

Reviewed by Betty Torain (Reader)
Reviewed on September 15, 2005
Karla, Thanks, for a soul touching POEM. Please keep sharing YOUR gift. Mother of the Universe.

Reviewed on September 15, 2005
Excellent. Excellent. I am proud of you to be my sister, dear karla. You have expressed brotherhood in the most affectionate and emotional way. Politics and religion are the main source of trouble which make the water too murky. But let's put a bridge in place to close the gap .... a bridge with strong foundatins that are built upon the concretes of truth, peace and love.
Your brother abdi-noor

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on September 14, 2005
Good thoughts, though I doubt we will ever see peace in our day...Ed

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2005
The same God made us all.
This kinda poem lifts the spirit. And makes one realise there really is hope.
Bloody marvellous....

Reviewed by Richard Christopher Suarez (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2005
Karla, You write these beautiful uniting works of art and so when you write there is such a powerful purpose that drives you and that ought always be honored! I love this and I applaud your work here!
Peace',
Rich Criso Suarez

Reviewed by Nordette Adams
Reviewed on September 14, 2005
You're always a light, Karla. This poem is no exception to the rule that is you. ~~Nordette

Reviewed by Felix Perry
Reviewed on September 14, 2005
thoughtful and understandable reply to a request that should always be a national interest but all too often pushed out of the world picture.

Felix

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on September 14, 2005
Again, I have yet to read this challenge, but, judging by the overwhelming responses, it is one that certainly stirs to action and inspires the pen with a true sense of brotherhood and purpose. Beautiful write, Karla, and I love the form that flows like a river of hope. Bless you, Kate xx

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on September 14, 2005
Great offering Karla!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on September 14, 2005
I LOVE it. This gives wind to all our sails in such a grand endeavor as the brotherhood of man. Wonderful, Karla! Dawn

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2005
Postive poetry written in a pure postive way. Very good.

Reviewed by Lori M (Reader)
Reviewed on September 14, 2005
A great poem!You are such a wonderful poet!

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on September 14, 2005
Karla, a magnificent poem! I'm right there to pray along with you and brother Abdi Noor!Amen!


Eileen

Reviewed on September 14, 2005
beautiful and inspiring, karla; very well done! brava!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, karen lynn. :D


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