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Creation!
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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"Creation!"

(c) 2005, Karla Dorman.
^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^
a blank sheet of paper:
unlined,
no words,
no color
until i put it there -
i make
my mark.
Creation!
something out of nothing;
new worlds
open
before me -
and behold, it is good 
[this must
be how
God felt on
that very first morning].
^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^ ^


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Reviewed by Regis Auffray
Reviewed on October 28, 2005
Yes. You are a creator, Karla. And I am grateful that you share your creations with us. Thank you. Amour et paix.

Regis

Reviewed on October 28, 2005
(((Karla)))

This is short, but oh, it says VOLUMES!! spectacular poem, your muse is SOARING to higher realms!! keep it up!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, karen lynn. :D

Reviewed by Thomas Lanechanger (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2005
Karla, your poetry is second to none, my friend! An outstanding creation! Thanks for sharing it. Take good care and be well. Brava!

Reviewed by Lisa Hilbers
Reviewed on October 28, 2005
I just feel priviledged to be able to co-create on the same page as yours!
Ron is right..You have come a long way, and done it with an awesome tribute to mankind!

Lisa

Reviewed by Andy Turner (Reader)
Reviewed on October 28, 2005
Yup when he turned on the light..

Reviewed by Paul Berube
Reviewed on October 28, 2005
Karla,

" And It Is Good "

Reviewed by Suzie Palmer
Reviewed on October 27, 2005
Yes, yes ... this is beautiful Karla!! From perfect void God created. Out of no-thing-ness Creation has come!! I love the analogy of writing to the Creation of God!! What a blessing to be co-creators!!
Thanks for reminding us of the blessing it is to create from what seems an empty page!!
Love & Creativity
Suzie xoxox :-)

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on October 27, 2005
Wow Karla, so few words, create such a unique poem...excellent!

love and peace, Carole

Reviewed by Erin Kelly-Moen
Reviewed on October 27, 2005
You are Creation in Progress, Karla, loved for your uniqueness. God, or the word, God, holds the absolute feelings of Beholdeness. Scary? You bet! Unattainable? We will see...

Erin Elizabeth Kelly-Moen

Reviewed by jude forese
Reviewed on October 27, 2005
the microcosom of creativity reflects the macrocosom of expression ...

creative write!


Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on October 27, 2005
Excellent poem Karla!We are all co-creator's in our small way, his is a mighty large paper;-)

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by Dawn Richerson
Reviewed on October 27, 2005
so enjoyed this creation, Karla.

Reviewed by Ron (sketchman) Axelson (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2005
You've sure come along way baby..
xoxoxoxox

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on October 27, 2005
A Wonderful Creation, Karla!

Reviewed by Leland Waldrip
Reviewed on October 27, 2005
Nice creation, Karla. That poem wasn't there til you put it there.
Best regards,
Leland

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on October 27, 2005
Awwwwww this is short but a very powerful creation!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed by Karen Cino
Reviewed on October 27, 2005
You're right on the money. Every time I take out my black marble composition notebook, or piece of paper towel to create, I get a chill running through my body....oh yes the power to create.

Excellent write..

Karen

Reviewed by Carmen Ruggero
Reviewed on October 27, 2005
I'm sure it was! Our life is like a blank piece of paper where day by day we color it with our creation.

Carmen

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on October 27, 2005
You think so, eh?

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on October 27, 2005
You mark your den territory well, Karla! You pay for the space so create as you will! CREATE ... CREATE ... CREATE!

Sage


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