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Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner

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at the time of death
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gunshots sound
screaming cries
(why am i in pain)
head spinning
vision fading
(why is it so dark)
blood flowing
heartbeat slows
(why do i have to die)
paramedics
try--no use
he's gone
flatline
why did this happen
such a waste
young man with
so much potential
now his life is over
for what--his shoes
his clothes
because of his race
for twenty dollars
his mama cries
she can't believe it
it can't be true
such a good boy
always listens
respects his mama
works to help me out
such a senseless death
confusion
at the time of death


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 Reviews of "at the time of death"
Reviewed on March 23, 2004
oh! oh! here's a poem you wrote, and i didn't RATE it?? BAAAAAAAAAAAD, karen, BAD!!! SORry about that; now I am gonna' have to go through your millions (LOL) of poems and see which ones i didn't rate! So if you get a whole slew of ratings all of a sudden from me, now you'll know why!

ANYWAY...Karla, this is a powerful, heartbreaking write! May we NEVER forget!!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin, Karen Lynn. :( >tears <

Reviewed by Josephine Bohen
Reviewed on May 16, 2002
So tru and so sad.

Reviewed by Sandi Schraut
Reviewed on May 15, 2002
so much said in one poem, gosh I loved it! Sandi

Reviewed by Cathy Montgomery (Reader)
Reviewed on May 15, 2002
Heartbreaking. Such a strong, moving write...


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