Blimey... what a great Good Friday write is this, Karla!! Almost the "My God, my God, why have you forsaken Me" - kinda thing... perhaps it is just me... and with the indigo sky and all. Think this is fabulous, whether the association is intended or not. Graphic and intense. TY Kate... Happy Easter!! :)) xx
Even without the nights light,
You bring into our lives as well light,
Each poem you do ultimately write,
Makes each of us feel completely and totally bright...Ed
A wonderful celestial composition, Karla! The stars do guide us on journeys with friends and reinforce the light patterns in our lives. The stars connect us to the points of light and kindred spirits in our own lives. I also love the way you formed this poem, with the three paragraphs that appear to represent the letter E!
Once we notice that the stars are our friends we come to realize that we are fortunate and do share this common bond with our world.
Love and peace,
Susan
Karla
This is an absolutely beautiful and poignant piece,full of longing and yearning for our absent friends and companions...
Just bless them and send your love to them, is the very best thing you could do, you would be amazed and staggered at the spiritual and psychological effect your prayers and wishes has on other people...:)
When you have loved someone or known them, then you never really lose them, they just become an eternal and integral part of what makes up the new you !
Your muse continues to soar like a condor on the hot thermals, and you really have turned into a fully fledged poet of notable talent, innovation and skill !
Love and Blessings
Peter
'Better Without You'is a compelling narrative that explores the complexities of an affair, hidden secrets, and abuse. It also highlights a daughter's heartfelt journey as she cares for her mother who is battling dementia.
Gina
Love and Hugs, Birgit and Roger
Paul;-)
You bring into our lives as well light,
Each poem you do ultimately write,
Makes each of us feel completely and totally bright...Ed
Happy Easter to you, Carole
SFX
Love Tinka
God Bless
Michelle!
Love,
Eileen
TRASK
Sage
Love and peace,
Susan
hugs and love, joanne
Wonderful and longing write; very well penned! BRAVA!
(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D
I am with Peter wholeheartedly on this one! :) Yuppers I am! :)
This is an absolutely beautiful and poignant piece,full of longing and yearning for our absent friends and companions...
Just bless them and send your love to them, is the very best thing you could do, you would be amazed and staggered at the spiritual and psychological effect your prayers and wishes has on other people...:)
When you have loved someone or known them, then you never really lose them, they just become an eternal and integral part of what makes up the new you !
Your muse continues to soar like a condor on the hot thermals, and you really have turned into a fully fledged poet of notable talent, innovation and skill !
Love and Blessings
Peter