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The Sky Goes to Indigo
by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner → (All Poetry by Karla Dorman, The StormSpinner)
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The sky goes to indigo
and one
by
one
the
stars blink a greeting; I've
come to
love
each
one
and accept them as friends.

When clouds obscure the night, and
none of
my
friends
is
visible, I feel sad ...
where have
they
gone
and
will they ever come back?

And so, I go out into
the night
and
hope
they
will shine their face once more
and bring
a
bit
of
light back into my life.

(c) 2006, Karla Dorman.

 

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 Reviews of "The Sky Goes to Indigo"
Reviewed by Regina Pounds
Reviewed on April 19, 2006
Lovely poem...to be close to the stars brings comfort...you expressed that beautifully.

Gina

Reviewed on April 17, 2006
A beautiful write!
Love and Hugs, Birgit and Roger

Reviewed by Kate Burnside
Reviewed on April 15, 2006
Blimey... what a great Good Friday write is this, Karla!! Almost the "My God, my God, why have you forsaken Me" - kinda thing... perhaps it is just me... and with the indigo sky and all. Think this is fabulous, whether the association is intended or not. Graphic and intense. TY Kate... Happy Easter!! :)) xx

Reviewed by Paul Williams
Reviewed on April 15, 2006
Ah Karla, all your friends shine for you, truly...as you shine for them...Excellent!

Paul;-)

Reviewed by Ed Matlack
Reviewed on April 15, 2006
Even without the nights light,
You bring into our lives as well light,
Each poem you do ultimately write,
Makes each of us feel completely and totally bright...Ed

Reviewed by Carole Mathys
Reviewed on April 15, 2006
Excellent ode to the wonder of stars, Karla!
Happy Easter to you, Carole

Reviewed by Mr. Ed
Reviewed on April 15, 2006
Stars truly are wondrous, as is your ode to them, Karla.

Reviewed by Silvia Hartmann
Reviewed on April 15, 2006
I like this. Very nice rhythm and flow, and the title rocks.

SFX

Reviewed by Tinka Boukes
Reviewed on April 15, 2006
Beautiful reminder that our friend just a starlight away but always watching!!

Love Tinka

Reviewed on April 14, 2006
Wow! Another amazing write Karla
God Bless
Michelle!

Reviewed by Jerry Bolton (Reader)
Reviewed on April 14, 2006
I don't know about friends, hell I just like to look at 'em. But friends?

Reviewed by E T Waldron
Reviewed on April 14, 2006
They are our friends and I couldn't bear to think of a sky without them. Well done Karla!

Love,
Eileen

Reviewed by - - - - - TRASK
Reviewed on April 14, 2006
My Favorite Color Indigo,i.e. At End Of That Tunnel There's Always a Light--If You Look For It...

TRASK

Reviewed by Sage Sweetwater
Reviewed on April 14, 2006
A wonderful celestial composition, Karla! The stars do guide us on journeys with friends and reinforce the light patterns in our lives. The stars connect us to the points of light and kindred spirits in our own lives. I also love the way you formed this poem, with the three paragraphs that appear to represent the letter E!

Sage

Reviewed by Susan de Vegter
Reviewed on April 14, 2006
Once we notice that the stars are our friends we come to realize that we are fortunate and do share this common bond with our world.
Love and peace,
Susan

Reviewed by Crystal Silver Angel (Reader)
Reviewed on April 14, 2006
great work..!!!!

hugs and love, joanne

Reviewed on April 14, 2006
Karla,

Wonderful and longing write; very well penned! BRAVA!

(((HUGS))) and much love, your twin sister, Karen Lynn. :D

I am with Peter wholeheartedly on this one! :) Yuppers I am! :)

Reviewed by Peter Paton
Reviewed on April 14, 2006
Karla
This is an absolutely beautiful and poignant piece,full of longing and yearning for our absent friends and companions...
Just bless them and send your love to them, is the very best thing you could do, you would be amazed and staggered at the spiritual and psychological effect your prayers and wishes has on other people...:)
When you have loved someone or known them, then you never really lose them, they just become an eternal and integral part of what makes up the new you !
Your muse continues to soar like a condor on the hot thermals, and you really have turned into a fully fledged poet of notable talent, innovation and skill !
Love and Blessings
Peter


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